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hahaha i dropped mine that nite.....fool...n if u so confident...how bout we keystyle rite now.....u drop 1st this time...u dnt have days this time...jst minutes ....wat u say herb...
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fuck it takin 2 long 2 respond...i gotta go 2 school...this shit will happen
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man fuck u, if u want another battle im down, but dead broke records cant afford to be spittin shit wit out helpin his rep......... uppin..........
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i think picture took it with punches and personals still nice battle
Pic=6/10 D=5.5/10 |
"soup in a tup" yo that at the bottom of my verse was sopposed to be "soap in a tub"
to go along wit that sqeaky clean line. uppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn |
do u fools listen da music or u skimp thru it...nobody know how da vote no more
opener-D...pp2 ya shit was corny structure-D..pp2 look at ya 3rd line dat shit was longess line i seen lol punchlines-D...he merked u wordplay-D.. multis-D flow-D..how da fukk could accomplish flow pp2 lines and dem shits took up da whole page personal's-pp2..u got dis dunn datz about it tho enjoyed-D..dis nigga verse was madd creative and he had some hott punches like da last line...pp2 ya shit ws good 2 but ya lines be havin like a 100 words in dem i dont know how u flow 2 a beat like dat fix that then you'll be good my vote-D return da favor da link is my sig..and dont give me a hate vote cuzz i vote 4 u |
ya u cant have long lines if u only rhymin the last words in each, but if u got 3 or more words rhymin, (multies) u can pull it off on a track trust me. i do it.
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ay yo somebody vote on ma battle already....ma bad if im freepostin n junk lol
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I gotta give this to PP2 coz he was jus a lil bit better out of the 2. D's verses were quite long and hard to read and i dont like the idea of Bolding every other word it makes the verse look tacky but it was good.
PP2 again long verses but they were good ones and ur punches and personals were stronger than D's V/PP2 |
upppin..... hahahah, 58-10, test me, hahahahahahahhaha
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I pictured it perfect that this battle would impinge, and it did, nice battle but theres always a loser and the loser today is D~Illar or somein like that
You didn't come hard enough, maybe you should have dropped last, ?? But the hard hitter here was PP. v/PP RETURN THE FAVOR!, NOW GAME OVER.......... |
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