toxic took this one all the way to the bank, no questions

Yo toxic murderd u dawgfatha dont batlle him anymore its just embarassing but i give my vote to toxicverbs

killed
 

dawgfatha youve ben murdered by toxic, da aids and the couldnt shine even if you waxed clean were bare jokes.

Return da fav toxic verbz plz

Cheerz

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121372
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121849

dawg - aight first off fix ya structure...than stop wit the simple rhymes...u need to throw hard punches and directly at him....use personals!!....use meta's too...they help ur punches land hard as fuck.....flow sucked too....go to tutorials and learn everything there....

toxic - your shit had better structure but dont use "//" cuz it is too newbieish....ur flow wasnt great cuz of long ass lines....but u threw punches!!....suggest u elevate in usin betta meta's....keep usin personals....elevate cuz u got potential....jus dont make ur lines so long....

vote - toxic

Yo Jae Gutter Up In Dis Shit// My Homie// Its Bout To Get Crunk// Yall Betta Watch Out Cuz Dis Nigga Is On Fire// But He Cant Beat Me

Aight.. this battle was a joke.. no comp at all... toxic took this battle by a mile.. i shouldn't have to explain..

vote=toxic

lmaooo yo toxic y u battle dis lame dunn..

opener-toxic...dat shit killed every bar dunn said
structure-toxic...
punchlines-toxic...killed him
wordplay-nun
multis-toxic..killed em here 2
personals-nun
enjoyed-toxic...its no explanation 4 dis shit dude got oded on real easy

my vote-toxic

return dat favor yo...da link is in my sig