uppin i no i gonna lose but lets get it finished

yeah come on people lets get this shit finished good battle though revell

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flow jay
structure jay
vocab tie
opener rev
closer tie
jay work on vocab and personals
rev work on vocab personals creativity and structure

my bad lol im gonna give it to jay he came better but both need elevation

keep bottin 1 more to finish it off vote for jay! lol

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Weak battle.But 2 newbie's,so what can I say?Both of you still need to work,cause if it was against another experienced rapper,you'd both be dead.But this one goes to Jay Dog.What the hell was that revell?You did not really hit Jay hard.Make fun of his name,sig.,and profile.Find anything like that.Same for u Jay.Neither of you had personals.Revell,your opener did not flow.Keep each line around the same # of sllyables.And ur opener,Wash Out?What that all bout.I would give this to easy if I could,cause he did better than both of you.

Vote-Jay Dogg