aiight i will fo sho and thanx for da honest feedback playa

Aight.. pretty tight from a technical aspect, I can certainly imagine it flowing well.. though id be nicer if you actually rapped it to a beat. Had multies in there, nice rhyme and shit. Ghangsta rap like that ain't really my fav... so I'm not gonna comment except to say it was pretty good for ghansta rap.

Peace.

i felt that shit all the way through...was very nice very very nice....keep it up....u proved u were a killah with that song...nice..keep it up...thats wht im talkin about..THATS TALENT....but try not to rap about guns and killin ppl so much cause u dont live that life and i hope u dont anyways....try rap about positive shit...shit uve been through or seen in the world...let niggaz kno whts up....not bout shit every1 wants 2 hear...bout guns and shit...thats why nas song i kno i can was such a hit cause no1 expected him 2 spit about reality...expected him to spit about killin a nigga or some shit or beefin...so it blew peeps away...try head that direction and u'll see u'll be very respected....keep it up...pce

tru i dont live that life lmfao but my bro duz and my dad lives in the crazy part of new york..but i dun live wit my dad i jus visit him but thanx for the feedback playa!

that woz tight man, i rapped it to a beat and flows tight..
feelin it..thats how we represent.
tha finest... LK

thanx dawg... LYRIKAL DESTRUKTION TILL I DIE.....all yall otha niggaz cant really stop me :)

come on yall dont sleep on this

i think the opener started the whole piece off well,
flow and vocab was carried through all the way,
creativeness was nice,
word-play was good,
sick drop..

Lyrikal D's n G's...........Krysis...out....

thanx dawg.....uppin

thats shit was cool i was feeling that shit but the whole hook thing i was buggin out too....no disrespect but over all fire....1

ya that was jus sum gangsta hook anywayz UPN

dont sleep on me

that was some ill shit dawg stay up on ya game cuz

fo real mayn good looks ...uppin this ma fucka

Nice Verse/Song Playa' ....!!!! Shit Is Heated!!!! Hot Hot Hottt