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ok opener li
flow li kuniva u had an ok flow it was off in places though and u used the same word 2 make it rhyme punches im gonna say li good on ur part though li personals tie both came with mad personals multis didny c any both could use work vocab tie both were ok both could use a lil work though closer tie li urs was 2 soft and kuniva he wanted out of we i no that good verses from both id like 2 c another rematch i feel li,s verse came a lil harder though kuniva ive seen better from u lookin forward 2 round 3 |
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i never used the same word to rhyme, i rhymed the word in front of it, thats a legitimate rhyme
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so i battle L.I. the first time, shit, with my verse i had him...
tell he realized the rules, and goes and bitches to the admins... nice opener not a very good punch though obviously records dont mean shit, he cant even get into my crew... ive heard of battlin less talent to boost ur record, but why newbs?... good set up line punch again wasnt to good L.I.?? that shit stands for Lyrically Incapable... on some site tryna find a rhyme, while my shit is inescapable... i liked that nice personal and punch and nigga we may be the same age, but im years ahead'a u... why do u think class sic picked me instead'a u... ouch u posted a half ass verse against me and got lucky... i got DQ'ed before a vote could tell u how much u suck b... decent first line and nice personal ur terrible, shit, half the vets dont even know L.I.... u make no difference on this site bitch, u may ass well die... ouch nice good personal and decent punch no one wants u in their crew, and no one wanted to be in the one u made... u were with UE for like a week, and had ur own for maybe two days... lmaoooooooo damn i like that 2 good punch and personal nice closer |
Shit why u complain bout round one, either way u woulda got the 'L'etter...
In our first battle my verse next to urs was like Toy story,'lightyears' better.... decent opener Hatin on me, sayin im wack, but cant let me go...u need me like a vitamin... This two sided bitch goin from crackin on my rhymes to sayin Let him in!!... lmaoooooo damn nice nice Dissin an emcee thats bout to be accepted in your crew... Then in just week, on their roster, ill be placed ahead of you... ouch nice personal Think he hot shit but he dont pursue true emcees... Seems to me that all he wants to battle are newbies... pretty decent coulda been better Just had to challenge me to get pay back and be reimbursed... We battled last month, all that time u could only come up wit that verse?!?!... nice punch Biggest freeposter alive thats why your post count towers... Look how much he already posted and its only been open an hour!!... weak booooooo! Lost the first battle, and now this one is ur second chance... Just like 'colorado', your record's gonna have an 'avalanche'... set up line .......... nothin second was decent So i hope i finished your ass off and dont challenge me again... Instead off backstabbin me, decide if im a foe or friend... weak closer not even nothin there.......... wheres it at? |
^ and who won?
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kuniva got this 1 this time around stayed more consistant good verses from both though nice battle l.i holla at ya boi and do i smell a 3rd battle? |
u do, but next time we on a team.
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Aight Here Is the Break-Down!!! No Bull-Shit!!!!
Checck Kuniva's Lines: so i battle L.I. the first time, shit, with my verse i had him... tell he realized the rules, and goes and bitches to the admins... ^Alright Loose The Opener' .. Ver Weak!! 2/10 L.I.?? that shit stands for Lyrically Incapable... on some site tryna find a rhyme, while my shit is inescapable... ^Nice Punch' ... Good Personal - - Aigh Vocab!! 9/10 Probably One Of Your Best Lines!! no one wants u in their crew, and no one wanted to be in the one u made... u were with UE for like a week, and had ur own for maybe two days... ^Alright Closer' Nice Punch 8/10 Aight Checckity Check L.I.'s Lines: Shit why u complain bout round one, either way u woulda got the 'L'etter... In our first battle my verse next to urs was like Toy story,'lightyears' better.... ^Nice Opener!' .. Very Well Worded' ... 9/10 Hatin on me, sayin im wack, but cant let me go...u need me like a vitamin... This two sided bitch goin from crackin on my rhymes to sayin Let him in!!... ^Nice Punchline' .. lol 10/10 So i hope i finished your ass off and dont challenge me again... Instead off backstabbin me, decide if im a foe or friend... ^Alright Closer 9/10 .... |
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