Don't freepost. That's all I have to say.

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this was a hott battle....crazy punches from both..i think shadows came a little harder tho especially his first 2 bars...sick shyt fam..killah had some sick shyt too tho..i was feelin both verses...lots of wordplay in both..good structure on both flow was perfect easy reads one of the best battles i have seen felt both pieces..so my vote is.....

tie :-D

na jk my vote go to shadows edge by a lil killah almost had this but i think shadows first two bars were sick and made him win

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can someone please vote on a battle in my sig

breakdown for killah bwoy:

flow:choppy for the most part in spots it worked but not well enough for me keep trying though 5/10

volcab:alright job i guess nothing special though 6/10

punches:some alright lines nothing i'm gonna quote though you know what worked and what didn't keep on it though 6/10

overall:17/30 well written verse with some room to improve

breakdown for shadows edge:

flow:good not above average but solid and better then your oppenent 7/10

volcab:alright you win here too 7/10

punches:some alright open disses and some basic personals nothing amazing but keep working on it 6/10

overall:20/30

vote--shadow's edge

I ain't tryin to hate but that intro was kinda wack...........anyway, Killah came wit some alright punches, his verse lacked any really hard hitting ones though. It just felt like it was missing something........... Shadow had the same effect on me until I saw one line.......

Punches all played, like u bought ‘em from the “best of ‘03” shelf
N bite so much, swallowing your verse leave me full of myself
^^^That one sealed it for me.......

Vote - Shadow

Aight.. thanks for the feedback and honest votes everyone... just drop a link and I'll return the favor..

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http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...73&page=1&pp=15
vote here and il return the favour

v/ Shadow

Because shadow edges structure was readable and he flowed while Killa bwoy had wack structure and his punches were there but its impossible to make a good punch with no flow the only thing good was your INTRO anyway as i was saying Killa bwoy had more mulits i thinlmk but at the end of the day PUNCHES IS WHAT COUNTS IN A BATTLE.. so i`m going with shadow because i liked the chalk line.

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Just one more vote people...

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ok check it

verbally Demolish ya lines Step to me And You'll get blown away like a proximity mine.../
Ya Flow Ya structure ya rhymes it was all originally mine I gave it to you 'cause your ass-cheeks i wasn't tryna be-kind../

should have switched these around an it woulda have been better it was decent though

Fuck Shadows edge,drop a verse near his feet have him dodgin' my lines singin Killah's Pledge/
This kid jus' started rappin' and he's already "fallin' off" Take the Win push this kid over the ledge..../

another long ass line coulda have been worded beter at the end

Battle me and you'll lose ya life,lose ya nike's Jordan fans don't like me 'cause I rip up "mic's"(mikes)..../
Spit sharp lyriks like swords N' Pikes Now shadows runnin' down the street becuase he heard I rip up Dikes....../

good use of multies nice first line and decent punch again
lmao the rest i aint even feal like postin you know it wasnt even that good one of the weakest verses you done shoulda used shit like this against me lmao

I thought this cat might have skill.. but as luck would have it
This cat’s best chance of winning is with a three hour skit…
How he gonna win when his Barr(bar) wider than Roseanne?
That’s why when he look in the mirror he see his only fan…

i liked this nice shit good wordplay in and nice punchs

all the other shit to lazy to post up it was good in spots and bad in other spots some were pretty weak punchs should have just left out the chalk line thing overall though pretty good verse

vote shadows edge

rematch this though wanna see it again later