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I think its white powder on this. Even though he aint give me a good vote i aint gonna lie. Vinman's lines were too simple and no good punches.
Powder went hard when he said

This boy’s from chi-town..hes gone with the wind
Like an indian imma leave this cat skinned

White powder hands down

yo this battle was cool but both could of elevated both had decent punchlines and some decent wordplay..u guys r getting better each time u battle but this vote goes to whitepowder for better flow return the favor and vote on this battle

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dawm white powder ur garbage kid ur shit barely ryhme struger was bad nad verse was horrible Vinamen had some good punche and ryhme Vote-Vinamen

I dont kno what this kids talkin bout... If you see my whole thing rhymed...Maybe your too preschool to notice...

I sense some D/R

Well this was a one sided battle obviously. You'll proabably say that this is a hate vote cause Vinman didn't vote for me, but as you will see, this thing is going 5 and 0. So before you start to bitch just wait and see.

Vinman, the reason I was bitching was cause you gotta explain your votes. I'll lead by example.

Im a lyrical soldier of fortune
Imma have this cat popped like a balloon
- this was an okay opener, i give it a 6

Pity this cats only 14 years old
He’s like a good spliff…he’s rolled
-again an alright punch-5

Yo this boy’s hating on my flow
Tho he’s sniffin White Powder like WHOA
-like how ya made it pesonal and brought in his name 7

This boy’s from chi-town..hes gone with the wind
Like an indian imma leave this cat skinned
-nice muliti which picks the flow, -8

He said his cousin got capped
Imma leave him like garbage.. hes scrapped
-Kinda weak, -5

This guy ain’t got no rhymes
Hes gonna end up snortin my lines
-this was a nice punch -8

When this cats dead his headstones gonna read
“This Cat Got Capped But Didn’t Bleed”
-was wonderin where you were go'n with this, but after I read the rest this turned into a good punch -8

Cause im poppin him with lyrical slugs
fuck this welfare kids’ bound to do drugs
-This was alright, 5 not much a punch here

Please keep him off the streets
Cause this cat still pisses in his sheets
-wasn't really feel'n it 6

That’s it imma hafta end this battle
And let this baby go play with his rattle
-a totally played out line, -4


spittin on this nigger cuse he straight up suck//
his nose so big that shit look like a duck//
-this is just whack, your talk'n bout his nose?-3

im fin to beat this nigger in a one round bout//
coming to house and kicking him out//
-need to elivate this- 4

i reall y didnt want to battle this lame//
maybe cuse of his 15 min of fame//
- a bit better, but the second line made no sense-5

he thinks hes the shit cuse his skin is white//
dont be surprised if that nigger likes to bite//
-this made no sense on one had your saying he's white and then saying hes black -0

he probably lives with old ass daddy//
well why not when he lives in the back of a caddy//
-ummm okay, this is just filler-3

that the end of the rap about white powder//
shit he screaming i bet even louder and louder
-again, you got nothing here, if thats a punch it didn't hit. 2

totals
Vinman- 17
Whitepowder-61

wow nice explanation Da Vinci... Thanks for the constructive critism...

Ty for the vote too...

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very funny battle i enjoyed every minute of it.


vinman needs alot of work even though his shit was very funny.white powder had a very serious approach i really like that but his shit needs work also.



vote:vinman

Yo Unknown Assassin.. care to explain why you voted? cause u didnt

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Vinman-what the fuck where u thinking? ive never seen kiddy rhymes like that in my life...WORK ON MAJOR VOCAB AND PUNCHES U DIG?....ur flow was good so was structure...u had nooooooooo multies...u str8 up got fucked nigga

White Powder-congrats u just beat a nigga...lol and u white? niice...ur punches was there,flow and structure was good,vocab wasnt weak like Vinmans....u had everythin right...

vote-white powder..pce

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White Powder got DA Full Force dats da thing Yo Vin man u gettin better go for da Punches man DA Punches I liked Both Y A Style u t WHite POwder Got this 1

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