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break down

first killuminatic...

I saw your pic u was rockin avirex
That went outta style 10 years ago nigga where u pay for fits?
7
Actin like u smoke but ya eyes aint chinky,
U still choke then wonder why u aint beat me
6.5
Dont lie u spend ya whole life tryin to be me
I wont forget, youre the first one im sendin the cd
9
Boy ya just an anoyance like whistlin through gap teeth
U dont have to listen to acknowledge my rap sheet
8
Dude likes his men hard and soft at the same time
One who got whiffle balls when its game time
7
Biker dude with a helmet and no visor
His mom didnt like his new friend but she'd still ride him
7
He pulled out this dudes ass when his mom caught him
Said "Sodomy aint that bad look at Saddam"
8


yo nigga you aint never gonna be gangsta fam you just fucking a gangsta fan//
the only thing you ever killed was your carrier when got in this battle with gam//7.5
you the first to run from a fight but the first to talk cause you be speekin' quick//
and this nigga be the first to say his rhymes is deep..........yeah deep in shit!//8
all this bitch do is talk gangsta but in the end he just another newbie herb//
OH! yeah this nigga gangsta.......yeah right.......livin in a gangsta suburb//7
(ha! ha! ha!)
truthfuly i dont like guns......so i'll just slice you up and stick you in bags//
cause man i dont really like loud noises.......so mabe i'll just stick to stabs//5
and if you ever do git a gun and blast it....... you better run and stash it//
cause you know them niggas in jail love white boys that act like faggots//6.5


breakdown v-kiill

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Im a have to give this to Gambino his spit was off the hook and made some kind of sense.
Killu i think your problem relied in your structure so thats mainly what you need to work on. flow was nice

vote= Gambino

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Flow- Kill
Punches- Gam
Multies- Kill
Vocab- Tie
Creativity- Gam
Content- Gam

VOTE- Gambino.... His punches just blew kid out the water thats what won if for you .. Nice verse

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ok checkit

gambino merked him even though his bars started off way to stretched he gathered it up an got flow back an came with sum hard ass punchs straight to the point but ya vocab lacked and so did ya wordplay try elvatin in that area nice drop though

killuminatic you had good strucutre nice flow in it but didnt se no good punchs from you and you also need to elevate on your vocab and wordplay and try to work more punchs and personals in your verse and stay consistent with them