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MARVOLoUsJ1009 04-26-04 12:15 AM

lol word dis was a corny battle....

opener-umm discharge even dat shit didn't ryhme..and toxic ya shit was just corny
structure-charge...toxic lmaooo ya shit was da worst
punchlines-charge
personals-nun
enjoyed-discharge...i mean both of ya'll came weak but his shit was betta all around

my vote-discharge

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DeaDly RhymeZ 01 04-26-04 12:28 AM

um discharge sliped throught the crack if the punches n TOxic verbs got washed away like dirt on a car that went through a CArwash i mean he lost

Vote DISCHArge

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-26-04 12:48 AM

yea
i acccpt dis of losin i lost da battle ok i lost

shadow 04-26-04 07:11 AM

naw man no hard feeelings i did shyty but dont be sayin you merked me

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 04-26-04 12:48 PM

well toxic u was too weak ur Structure was VERY BAD u NEEd more punchs Worst Line: stand at attention when i get to the mic so u betta listen// u fucked up cunt ofa dike
best line:cant defeat me
cuz u cant beat what u cant see
if i ever seen a wackass ho like u then id have u runnin from me


CHarge Came at u harder Structure nice more punches and remember all about da Punches

Toxic u need to work on ur STRUCTURE like CRAZY ur structure is like 3/10 so work on dat u need more multis to 3/10 u dint do alot punches to weak dint even connect ur flow u didint have 1 2/10 its allright you'll be better

Charge u had good multi punches 9/10 so that was GREAT! for the Structure 8/10 thats good Flow like 8/10 charge u got off on him BEST LINES: youve lost two in a row and its gonna be ya next defeat//
your not a real mc your a fuckin fake//
tryin to battle me was your fatal mistake//
its people like u i hate,you call ya self toxic but cant intoxicate//
you lie so im irrate,you steal ya shit you cant fabricate//
its you that ill annihalate,i won this in tha starting gate//
that shit WAS NICE!

So Overall Charge gets the win for more Punches and better Flow STucture overal like i said well u get my vote

Vote: CHARGE

Juelz 04-26-04 12:56 PM

Punches: to
Personals: to
Flow:to
Structure:to
Opener: Tie
Closer: Tie
Vocab: Toxic
Multies: to( won the battle for you)

Vote: to

LostChild 04-26-04 01:26 PM

Both them niggas shit was off
But i believe toxic came with much better lyrics
Both of you need to work on your strucutre
but i gotta give it to toxic

hotrod2k4 04-26-04 03:44 PM

discharge, no contest toxic verbs never had the slightest chance

Wulf 04-26-04 04:49 PM

Man what, how the hell are you any kind of rank here besides n00b? that was weak lmao discharge chould of spit 3 bars and beat you i'm not really going to go into the whole break down cuz its not needed

VOTE DIS

Wulf 04-26-04 04:50 PM

ohh and that juelz vote should get thrown out its b/s but i dont think it matters to much

Diagnose 04-26-04 06:30 PM

dawg..i thought there were no crew votes in this shyt...aight then..i'm voting

UnDeStRuCaBlE 04-26-04 06:48 PM

Punches: Tie (both weak)
Personals: Tie (none present)
Flow: Discharge
Structure: Discharge
Opener: Tie
Closer: Tie
Vocab: Toxic ( jus by a lil)
Multies: Discharge( won the battle for you)
Y'all got to do better
Vote: Discharge

u both did bad as hellz...u guys are newbs and shyt..but come on...don't battle if ur gonna battle like that aight...toxic just quit


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