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GKillaz05 04-30-04 10:16 AM

Kingz - I was feeling your flow, it was off in some spots, but you came hard with some sweet punches, and liked your wordplay.

Best Line - Im bout to lyrically torture you…but aint gunna kill-ya-yet
When im done with you…there be nuttin left but a ‘Silhouette’

he thinks his verse has got the crowd at the ‘edge’ of their seat
I suppose that could be true…cos we are all falling asleep!

Worst Line - This kids says he is ‘sick’….yeh dog you look like it
Rapping like some1 tampered with ya drink…did someone spike it?

Shadow - Good spit man, had a better flow goin, thought you had some good punches in there and good wordplay.

Best Line - Crack head father, dropped you so many times like your avvy
Now all Kingz say is “I wanna drop shit.. just like my daddy”

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to Kingz, he had better flow going was liking his style more and his punches hit harder. Shadow, your shit was tight to.. but I wasnt feeling it as much, I thought Kingz punches were harder, step up on the punches next time man, and maybe some more multi's.

VOTE - Kingz

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119532

Shadows edge 04-30-04 10:38 AM

Wow... 2 explained votes. Good job people. Next time don't bother voting.

Shadows edge 04-30-04 10:44 AM

Anyway, its:

Shadow - 1, Kingz - 1 or 2, if you count Buzz

Kingz 04-30-04 10:53 AM

ur free posting now. u gunna get disqualifed.

by the way its upto dirtboy69 to count the votes

Shadows edge 04-30-04 10:54 AM

^^ I'm not freeposting, I'm upping for some votes with feedback.

-Zone Out- 04-30-04 10:59 AM

yes
Kingz got this in a weak battle
it was pretty close
but Kingz used his forced words better
so
vote/Kingz

Shadows edge 04-30-04 11:07 AM

^^ wow. low blow.

Kingz -3 Shadow - 1

King Solo 04-30-04 11:13 AM

all round tight ass battle
i do think both y'all cud have done better cuz u both got skillz

flow and structure was excellent from both playas
both y'all hit wit hard punches and both had gud connection but i felt that kingz was hittin a little harder and i cud get into his verse more. some gud use of vocabs, gud wordplay u know it. both y'all opened strong and ended strong and i'd say it was a tight even battle hard to call.

i pick kingz cuz like i said i was feelin his verse more and he hit harder in my opinion
plus he had my favourite line:
this dog can’t even defend his self, with weak punches and sad flows
but jus remember that after dark…there are no shadows!
funny shit!!

My vote goes to Kingz

-Zone Out- 04-30-04 11:20 AM

wow
thats another person votin against you for Kingz
do you get the hint yet?
he beat you
and this match should have been over with 5-0
but, ehh..Kingz was bullshitted out of one vote
so..it doesnt matter
he's gonna win regardless

Shadows edge 04-30-04 11:22 AM

^^ I didn't say his verse was whack. It was good. I just don't like unexplained votes and hate voters. Now stop freeposting.

CounTREE Jay 04-30-04 11:28 AM

Wait hold on, I'm the only person who voted for Shadow's Edge, and I gave the most complete explanation out of anyone, so don't say I bullshitted my shit, just 'cause I have a different opinion, cause I always vote honestly, not like the rest of the dick-ridin' and hatin' bytchez on this site. So watch whoz fuckin' honesty you quetionin' nigga.

LyricalMethod 04-30-04 11:49 AM

nice battle. lyrically both you guys take the cake. nice punches by Kingz also nice mental attack by Shadow. all in all this was a nice battle. but i give my vote to KIngz because his verse rhymed more and made alot more sence. Shadow i had to really sick back for aminute and read your shit over and over until i got it.

vote=Kingz

Shadows edge 04-30-04 01:20 PM

Aight man. Thanks for the feedback ^^ I know I got that problem sometimes.

DirtBoy69 05-02-04 04:20 PM

breakdown for kingz:

flow:no off spots solid all the way through good job 7/10

volcab:nice for the most part again no problems here 7/10

punches:some real good lines good job at addressing shadow through the whole peice best line,"You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia" 7/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for shadow's edge:

flow:nice job no problems here 7/10

volcab:kinda below kingz i thought still alright just down abit 6/10

punches:nothing too much no use of the words in the punches and really nothing but played topcis and shit that just wasn't seeming to be hitting try harder next week 5/10

overall:18/30

vote--kingz ran away with this good verse you surprised me

DirtBoy69 05-03-04 09:35 AM

7-2 kingz wins


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