jea goodlooks niggaz datz 5-0
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Vote- Marv
Simply for the fact that King didn't really have any punches. It was all just flowing and rhyming but there was no real impact...that's obviously a no no in text battling. Also, fix your structures guys. That shit comes off as really n00bish with all of the punctuation marks everywhere and // at the end and shit. |
its ova..................
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breakdown for king solo:
flow:choppy almost everyline was kinda streched to fit the punch 5/10 volcab:alright kinda basic though 5/10 punches:most of the lines were kinda played or just plain weak you did have alot of them though my fav,"I’ll inject u wit an allergy have u looking fatter than Bizarre//" not too bad 6/10 overall:16/30 breakdown for marvolousj1009: flow:alright alittle off in the lines through the middle of the verse but on more then king's 6/10 volcab:good use nothing amazing though 6/10 punches:best line,"u say im pussy? u "dont know who u fuckin with" like a "blind man havin sex"-" some of the lines were played but overall better then king's 7/10 overall:19/30 vote--marvolousj1009 |
7-0 marvolousj1009 wins this
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