Yo Thugzy Who U With Lil Nigga// Whats Yo Crew Name Think Dat// Dey Can Beat Da Squad Up!

lmao,we murderous methodz,and wot was wiv that crew vote

Aight Nigga Get Ready// U And One Of Yo Crew Members Yo Lc Meet Me At Da On Mic Homie//


We Makin Our Mark

ayo chek it dis nigga talk shit bout otha ppl and he from chi town//
iam from queenz nigga i dare u to say dat shit round my town//

^Weak Opener First Off!!! - - - Could Improve!!!! - - -

and ya bull shit rhymes are makin me sleepy//
and this aint a horor film dawg get cha face outa herre cuz its to creepy//

^Where's The Punch?? Playa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2/10

and luike master P said iam bout it bout it...reppin da queenz//
ma slogan is " killa any beefin nigga by all meenz"//

^Weak Closer Aswell - - - Evelate Kiid' .. Mad 'Master P' is Shiaaaaaaaaat' ... Holla!! lol


Aight Check

LostChild'sLines:

See im pist so im about to murder this bitch
You beatin me is impossible like a deathrow hit

^Alright Weak Opener' But Above' ..Da Joka'z..!!

You betta quit, cause when I spit, niggas be loving my shit
Take yo chic, real quick, cause ho's be lovin my dick

^Nice Use Of Multies' Aight Punch!!! 8/10

Better competition in a game of poker, retire like HOVA
Specially when I'm battlin bitches like this nigga DA JOKAH

^An Alright Closer' ...!!!

Dropping Decent Bars - - - With Decent Punches - - - OverAll' ..!! Nice Drop!!


Vote: LostChild

Yo Thugzy Who U Bringin Into Da Battle It Has To Be 4// Who U Bringin?

Me And Lc// U And Who Is It// Who U Bringin To Da Battle Man?

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ayo lost child had a crazy verse..your punches were ill..good wordplay strong multies nice structure and flow...u ripped this verse from opener to closer felt almost every bar..u came hard and had a couple good personals...strong verse..

lostchild: 7.5/10

da jokah u didnt really drop a hott verse your first couple bars were ill but then ya style fell off structure wasnt too good..u had a couple ill punches/personals...a little bit of wordplay/multies..overall i think u could have came harder than u did...nothing in your verse was really original or interesting but overall u had a OK verse...

da jokah: 6/10

vote: lostchild..i think u just came harder and took this battle with just the first half of your verse...overall u did better than da jokah and u have room for improvement but you ill...da jokah u should work on your wordplay and multies..it brings out the best in your verse..and also when the bars are the same length it brings more intensity and flow to your verse overall good stuff from both but lostchild took this

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hey my nigga LostChild bang the Jokah he had the punches and flow and structure he had everything i was loving his shit.
You betta quit, cause when I spit, niggas be loving my shit
Take yo chic, real quick, cause ho's be lovin my dick
that was funny.
i have to tell you jokah had some punches and for the flow he Did'nt have a flow he had some structure. What im trying to say it wasnt good enough to win my nigga LostChild.
So my vote is for LostChild

da jokah wins cause lost shild is a cheat so yea dotn even need to explain shti when i saw that had to give you the votes but if he was beatin you you need to elvate on vocab and personals alot get wordplay to help your punchs connect

aight here it is

no you came at it clean from the start good flow and creativity you kinda need to make you shit longer good style and punches nice flow

da good battle you shit was a lil hard to read and it became borin afta a while keep up wit ya shit ya need to work on ya shit some more but it was a good flow nice battle.....