afterwood had a better flow, better structure, and better everything.
Jpoll its alright~get em next time

vote afterwood

return da favor..............

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121108

please vote.
I got an easy win.but nobody is votin.

you fucking newb voters....you guys are pathetic!!

mane go fuk ya self....the only 'newb' here is you dawg, thats why you lost, thats why its 3-0 and that why ya fukin moaning at every vote goin gainst you, MAn the fuk dawg, u got beat thats the way it is....now hush up an realise that!!!harsh, but bitch this aint even on the streetz, every fukin werd ud say ed be hjoked otherwise.....

yur the newb bitch...look at my stats...yur a nothing...and i do battle in real life bitch...and you'd be owned by JP you fucking herb. Just cause you in a wack crew wit two decent emcees doens't mean your good..your crew is weak bitch...and yur weak

ok check it

afterword opener wasnt that good to me this first line was corny and the punch was decent the closer was pretty good wordplay nice punch rest of the verse had good flow and multies but the punchs and personals just werent that good to me just try workin on makin your punchs and personals better

jpoll opener was pretty nice good personals and decent punch closer was soft tried on the personals an punchs just didnt connect with me and threw the rest of the verse had good mulites as well wordplay wasnt that great but you had better punchs and personals threw the verse to me billy that hid and gary coleman is what got you the vote

not a very good battle to me

vote jpoll

of course dawg...yea.....

noob id kill you in both catagories, i mean man im not even too arsed coz this being text ya know, of course it dont mean shit, an i mean u know the street game yea so text aint really to fukin credible as street yea???, then why u getting all stressed bout tit dawg?... coz ya ass a fake

if all ya care bout is fukin battle records dawg then fuk! ya in the wrong game peepz....if ya wanna get this going then set it up dawg, in audio 'too' if ya want.....coz ill FUKIN murder You Bitch!

Fuk the peaZ! this bitch dont deserve one

okay let's have an audio battle then bitch........i was getting pissed cause it's like you herbs can't even fucking read

uppin uppin uppin ................................

herb....man ya jus fillin up the list, ure giving me fukin ammo dawg.....

stop fucking freeposting....or your gonna get banned bitch

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uppin...hit this up with some honest votes..........

Aight, this wasn't really that good of a battle, it had a few madd hott lines, but overall, coulda been betta on both y'allz parts.

After
Well, I think that whole butter/on a roll type shit has been played for a while now, regardless of whether it's bitten or not. Flow- Decent, nice touch on the change up, a lil' choppy in parts wit da rhymes. Punches- They were all right, one line stuck out, that'll be at the bottom. Personals- Not too good. The GayPoll line I wasn't feelin' at all. The others were just ok. Creativity- Liked the switch up, nice to see niggaz tryin' different things.

Fave Line:

like "lil rascals", cuz my flow iz da Cever, cuttin you down Eddie Haskell
now stop bendin backwards, even thow ya best flow comes out yur asshole

JPoll

Flow- A lil' betta, even though you did use the same word twice, other than that, it was betta overall, wit the rhymes and shit. Punches- Decent, the Opener was the best line. Personals- Weren't that good, but y'all was both about even on that. Creativity- Pretty good, never heard anything about the playboy mansion, or gettin' on video game heads, that was nice.(tru though, I dunno?)

Fave line:

You wouldn't be a dope gunfighter if you were 'Billy the Kid',
You got no balls avoiding real rhymers, they'd call you 'Billy that hid',

Liked that line.

It was a pretty even battle, and y'all both need some work, or to just take shit more seriously, but Ima give this one to JPoll