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-   -   IdEum [vs] DopeDalivery (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=121312)

DopeDelivary 05-02-04 02:26 AM

This battle needs votes like gore did in florida..... VOTES

Enhance 05-02-04 05:29 AM

I think dope deliver won this battle because he had harder hitten punches it was pretty weak but he came better because i deum had filers and i dit like his rhyme scheme peace.

Ozzy 05-03-04 06:53 AM

to explain my vote, the other guy was talking about threads and stuff about website shit instead of like...real shit... Dope did the same thing but his first 4 lines were pretty mad, so whatever I liked Dopes stuff more

DopeDelivary 05-03-04 05:58 PM

thx for the vote..... uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

L.I. 05-03-04 06:08 PM

My Vote
 
if u so dope then y u make a callout yet affraid to spit first
prolly cos u gotta search for a bit verse so u can hit worse
Nice opener...8/10
silly rabbit your shit aint working cos there no trix in this game
your wack as fuck cos your lines bout as original as your name
hahaha....6/10
u shoulda just backed off i dunno y u even check inta my thread
cos u was fucked b4 it started like brittany when newly wed
hmm....5/10
bitch its best u shut your mouth n just dont get inta me
cos 9 months 4 u were born i gave your mom a dope dalivery
nice!!!.....10/10

Verse Score - 29/40

Wow you surprised me....u had a solid verse....good punches....jus werk on wordplay and using better meta's....u had a good flow......elevate and keep battlin....u got potential....

im fixin-ta-smack this kid thats clearly spittin-it-wack
I mean damn kid u "suck at rappin" hope ya stickin-ta-track(check his profile)
Decent personal but this is used a lot...6/10
I make-it-better plus this kids as fake-as-pleather
Bitch ass get "ripped up quicker" than a break-up-letter
hahaha nice meta....9/10
Beatin this joke of a hoax without puttin up any effort
Its like my lines givin "paper cuts" cuz damn my text hurts
decent....not that hard of a punch though....6/10
i aim-for-ya-throat with neck shots that make this lame-nigga-choke
Kid your not even "real" a fuckin fable-at-most
Not feelin this....2/10
mista-cool DOPE sent you straight from bitch-ta-fool
For real give up rappin homie and stick-to-school
basic punch...coulda closed harder...5/10

Verse Score - 28/50

Okay your verse was hot til the last two bars...u fell of....u need sustainment....that fucked u up and thats why u lost....but u got mad potential too kid....good punches....keepin elevatin....

Vote - ideum

K-Trin 05-03-04 06:09 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121809
^^^^^vote


I like this battle.Flow goes to IDEUM.but creativity and complexity goes to Dope Dilevery.But punches.......
Both fo you had nice personals.But I think DopeDilvery's punches hit harder this time.

Vote-DopeDilevery(vote in my battle)

DopeDelivary 05-03-04 08:02 PM

one more and this battles closed.....................

Willa 05-05-04 12:57 AM

id
flow:8/10 good flow
vocab:6/10 pretty basic could use work
originality:6/10 a few played lines but prettygood could use more creativity
punches:7/10 hit pretty good needs more personals

Dop
flow:6/10 ok didnt flow quite as smooth as ids
vocab:6/10 again needs work pretty basic
originality:7/10 u came more creative then id
punches:5/10didnt hit very hard like 2 c more personals

over all this was a pretty good battle id gets my vote his punches hit just a lil harder


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