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ill

i wasnt feelin your verse to me your structure was weak yo flow was ok but the WU general wasnt feelin it.


Shady

i was feelin yours you had good punches and the flow was better structure was ok but better.

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yo a simple breakdown

ILL
you had a gud flow and structure and u hit out wit sum hard punches but a few weak ones. u had a little creativity in there which is hard to come by from newbs and it is difficult to spit first and win but u put out sum tight shit
SHADY
ure flow was on and so was ure structure but ure punches were off in this battle. sum were aight but mainly weak, u did a better spit against me, this one not ure best
u shud take ure own advice that u gave me, dont feed off verse cuz i aint doin that anymore unless i have to u know
aight spit but i think ill just took this one

..ILL.. won his rap was sweeter then candy
yo stuff was dandy yo flows, rhyme, structure,
multis and punchlines were raw u got a good
rap their that cool nice flow

my vote ILL