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Okay,both of were pretty whack.Ur rhymes were too simple.Add some complexity to it.
And flow was bad by both of u.I got to go to Sun with this one.Some of Sun's lines actually sounded llike a diss.

Vote-Sun

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Okay.. this battle was..ight..

Sunjian:
flow:8/10
creativity:6/10
punches:7/10

N:sight:
flow:8/10
creativity:6/10
punches:6/10


I liked yo startin sun jian.. its a nice starter for a nubbie

thanks yo uppin for votes do it for me and ill return the favor

Iight This Is How It Went Down
Sun
Flow=8
Punches=7
Open=8
Close=6

N-sight
Flow=5
Punces=6
Open=7
Close=6


I Think That Sun Was Better In This Battle So He Gets My Vote


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^^^ dat vote is hardly explain yo...

nigga jus put down some random #s...lol...didn't even add em up at the end

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aight...this is my breakdown...

flow - jian
structure - tie
punches - jian
opener - sight
closer - tie

aight..simply..jian had better punch....sight...you had good punchs but the punch that jian used
"""""""""""this guy doesnt understand the true essence of rappin.
sorry dog u have no future in rhymes, but talent in actin"""""""

that killed you right there

vote: Jian

It's all down to personal taste, but I'd pick N-Sight out of the two
Summary breakdown
N-Sight

Flow=8
Punches=7
Open=6
Close=6

Sun

Flow=6
Punches=7
Open=4
Close=6

The standout lines (or partial lines) IMO were
"your 'emcee eye' gets a dis-connect" - liked the wordplay
"semantically, you're an ant to me/ This call out wasn't to be taken romantically"
You had a few others in there, too.

"this guy doesnt understand the true essence of rappin.
sorry dog u have no future in rhymes, but talent in actin" - that WAS a good line.

But despite this, N-Sight gets my vote, but that's no slight on Sun...