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flow intelligent got merked

FLOW INTELLIGENT
not bad,but you need a lot of work to do.good flow,some of your stuff barely rhymed,so work on dat.apart from dat pretty good.

NEXION
very good disses,flow,easy to read,overall you were the better man with lines such as:
Takes you a while to write ur shit..so many [Hours]
But ur still gonna Come down like the 9/11 [Towers]
i liked yours way better than da other guys
vote:nexion

lol didnt rhyme ok dawgfather whatever u say 3-1 uppin for votes

flow - aight ur verse was decent....wordplay was good....flow was straight....but most of ur punches were wack....i liked the closer though....jus elevate on a consistant verse punchwise....
nexiom - u had an ok flow....wordplay was good....punches were lacking but u had a couple hard hitting ones....but u did have any personals.....elevate there....

Vote - nexiom....i felt his verse better....he had better punches than flow.....

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u call me out? guess ill be takin the newb's challenge//
nexion ill slice ya melon up like im makin a fruit salad//
6...pretty basic but a gud opener, not weak but not overly strong!!
this bitch comes wit weak flows. condoms? i'll need those//
cuz this battle is like a dream come true: me and a cheap hoe//
8...killa line. i liked this one a lot, gud personal makin a solid punch.
u need viagra to act hard, like special-ed teachers i smack tards//(retards)
leavin u more shook than double D's on female track stars//
7...gud line, wud have give u more score for it but i heard that viagra shit a few times.
i pulled ya skull back and all your wisdom died//
now watch me "run though" nexion, like a finish line//
5...pretty weak, no real damage wit that line...too basic.
ya got bitch raps, and they will be wrecked soon//
cause your "full of shit" son, like "public restrooms"//
6...average finish, not overly strong like ure open but still affective.


U shouldnt have accepted b/c ur Flow is Far from [Intelligent]
Your punches might as well be slaps ur Shits [Irrelivent]
7...gud open, a nice personal rippin his name there, i liked it!
Takes you a while to write ur shit..so many [Hours]
But ur still gonna Come down like the 9/11 [Towers]<R.I.P
7...another gud line, setup and punchline worked together perfectly.
Your ~Flow~ is softer then Play ~Doe~ u flat out [Blow]
My rhymes hit like Fire urs comin out like a light [Snow]
4...bleh, didnt like this line, far far too basic!!
You should know ur were gonna get a Lyrical [Thrashin]
Your Rhymes are Faker then Pam Anderson's Boobs just [Trash-Em]
5...gud punchline but the setup was really just a filler.
Maybe you can find a n00b that u can Actually [Beat]
You Just "Got served Suckah" so sit down,shut up, and Take a [Seat]
6...aight finisher, wasnt as strong as ure openin tho!!

OVERALL POINTS SCORE
FLOWINTELLIGENT = 32
NEXION = 29

V/ - flow

u call me out? guess ill be takin the newb's challenge//
nexion ill slice ya melon up like im makin a fruit salad//

^^ hahaha...the funniest thing about that line was the "newb's challenge" part

good 1

this bitch comes wit weak flows. condoms? i'll need those//
cuz this battle is like a dream come true: me and a cheap hoe//

^^ is nexion a female? if so..the line is OKAY...if not..it's eh...might have worked better had you said "easy" instead of cheap...decent



ya got bitch raps, and they will be wrecked soon//
cause your "full of shit" son, like "public restrooms"//

^^^ decent closer

U shouldnt have accepted b/c ur Flow is Far from [Intelligent]
Your punches might as well be slaps ur Shits [Irrelivent]

^^ 1st line was good, like it was setting up something. UNfortunately, the 2nd line didn't come through...eh line

But ur still gonna Come down like the 9/11 [Towers]<R.I.P
Your ~Flow~ is softer then Play ~Doe~ u flat out [Blow]

^^ THIS WAS AWFUL DAWG. DO NOT EVER USE A REFERENCE LIKE THIS FOR THE PURPOSE OF A CHEAP BATTLE, THEN HAVE THE AUDACITY TO SAY R.I.P.

NO NO NO NO

Maybe you can find a n00b that u can Actually [Beat]
You Just "Got served Suckah" so sit down,shut up, and Take a [Seat]

good attempt at a strong finish...you just needed a more complex punch with wordplay to pull this verse off


Vote: FLow...better punches/wordplay/complexity


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