Collab 5/10-You had the structure and vocab...and stuff
tony 7/10-you had the harder punches...Nice battle for both

Tony did come harder with the punches...Return the favor in this thread will ya
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...606#post1260606

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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uppin please favors will be returned .......honest feedback please.

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CoIIab im giving this to you, ur flow was hott all the multis , you didnt have too many punches but the multis and flow made up for it

Tony.... yo shit was hott i think you had the structure side of the battle and punches

Keep elevatin yall !!!

Vote= CoIIab

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ComeON YALL 5 FUCKIN VOTES AINT HARD RIGHT DAMN I RETURN FAVORS ALL THE TIME SO HOLLA BACK.....................WUN

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both these verse musta been slapped together in seconds...tony..i aint feelin verses that are just boastin about i fucked ur chick last night.........u needa stay away from that..........
collab....the first few lines,i dont even know what u were talkin about or what was the purpose.........ur whole verse was all over the place man.....u need to have ideas connect..both verses were weak..but tony,he stuck to tellin a story...n u were all over the place...i dont really know on what else to judge it on...cuz neither one of u had any punches or anything......collab u ahd one line about escalator...but that is played as hell.......so both yall need to step it up but for this battle vote is for tony

tony....u had sum decent punches and a couple hot hard hittin ones....fix ya structre....dont use //....too newbieish....flow was aight....work on wordplay too....jus elevate cuz ull get betta....
collab....now u had alot of weak punches....elevate there....flow wasnt that great....use personals and meta's.....go to tutorials and learn how to do ish....

Vote - tony for the more elevated verse

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damn you cant uppin- 10 times man.. is that a DQ??