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T12U3 K1LlA 04-30-04 08:25 PM

iight this was a close battle but i was felling shady rap more no offense to Phisyque u did good to but i think shady did better
vote=shady

K-Trin 04-30-04 08:34 PM

well,although you guys are voting for me.....I have to say,you guys not explaining voted.If I was in Physicue's place,I'd be pissed.

K-Trin 04-30-04 09:05 PM

I should stop voting on other people's battle,cause nobody votes in mines.DAMN

T12U3 K1LlA 04-30-04 09:15 PM

Shady Vote In My Battle Cuz I Voted In Urs Just Click On The Lil Sig

K-Trin 04-30-04 09:35 PM

uppin

K-Trin 05-01-04 02:06 PM

uppin

King Solo 05-01-04 02:11 PM

yo this was a tight battle

SHADY
flow - 8/10...on as always
structure - 7/10...gud as always
punches 7/10...better than the last battle i saw of ures, u showed a bit of creativity this time so keep that up!!
creativity - 6/10...showed a little but still cud use a little work.
overall - 28/40
PHYSIQUE
flow - 6/10...gud flow but it was off slightly.
structure - 7/10...gud structure just like shady.
punches - 6/10...u threw a cuple of gud ones but u lacked in creativity.
creativity - 4/10...i cudnt find anythin cretive that really caught my eye, u need to elevate on that shit.
overall - 23/40

VOTE - SHADY

Keep improvin both y'all!!

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-01-04 02:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phisyque
ayo

My punchez will Leave diz SHADY fellow Bright enough to ILLUMINATE/
You had to Chooze ya Fate, Ya swingin "SLOW" like tellin a Fat man TA LOSE THA WEIGHT/Itz a process
^^^okay nice opener,multi
Ill Toss Da Shock your way, like TORNADOEZ wit Lightning Rodz/
You thought you'd win?, You got a better chance at winnin if you wuz eva Fightin God/
^^^cool punch
Ill "SHA"ve hiz head off and "DY"sect ya BRAIN in Piecez, Mix em in a bag wit Reecez/
So you can have ya Head shipped in UNITZ to All ya Niecez/G=Unit,d12,and ETC
^^^nah dunny 2 much
My mic'z Dangerouz so im givin you a Notable Warnin, Before you get a chance to understand how my flowz'll be Formin/
Ill Stop ya Strikez like Thunder Stormz in Global Warmin/
^^didn't like dat
You stop in ya Trackz when you Heard me BLAZE, Ill put a stop to ya Girly Wayz/
Cuz you wouldnt get A"HEAD" in tha Votez if you wuz Flippin a Quarter for Thirty Dayz/
^^^lmaoo dat was a ill punch..and good finisher
match da barz
u up


u had a hott verse dunn u could of had a few personals but good i give it a 7/10

.....return da favor...link in my sig

L.I. 05-01-04 02:15 PM

Breakdown...

Opener - shady...good personal...
Flow - shady...he didnt have stretched lines...fix that phisyque...
Punches - tie...shady had weak punches...phisyque had weak punches too but a couple decent ones...
Wordplay - neither...
Structure - shady...urs was fucked up phis...
Personals - shady..he had a couple and phis had none...
Closer - neither...both closers were bad...

Vote - shady because he had more complexity to his verse...suggest u guys elevate on wordplay and punches...

Return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121094

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-01-04 02:16 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Shady1132
Fuck it,I'm a just do it anyways

Physique is whack,using rhymes so played out...it's like an antique/
Just look at ur losing-steak,just looking at it makes anybody shreik/
^^like and antique and anybody shreik...dont ryhme fukked up opener
Stop playin hide-and-seek...... and admiring my winning streak/
U neva gon get one,not even in tha long run,cause ur papa's a nun/
^^waitin 4 da punch
And ur mama's a sticky bun,cause she bathes in cum,from her favorite son/
See I'm 14,that how much you masterbate in front of tha computer screen/
^^still waitin
Cause U be sipping caffine,right off ur mama's "bean",till it's christmas green/
And I got machine guns,that weigh a ton,turn round and get a fast one/

Make ur mom scream 'MY LOVED ONE!!!",while shaving her hairy bun/
You probably know you just lost,and ur shit is colder than Jack Frost/
And mine's is hotter than an exhaust,cause I rhyme better than Rob Frost/
Stop eating mexican sause,cause you gon steal my shit,like I'm santa clause/


matter fact let me stop cuzz i cant catch ya flow or u writin ya bars madd retarded aneway da last 2 words of ya line neva ryhme dunn so u loose my vote rite there...5/10

my vote-phy

K-Trin 05-01-04 03:05 PM

uppin

Willa 05-01-04 03:15 PM

flow shady
opener shady
personals physique
structure shady
vocab tie bvoth good
closer physique
shady work on personals and throw in some more multis goood battle overall ur flow and vocab were really nice
physiqe work on ur structure ur bars r really stretched i liked ur multis and ur personals

K-Trin 05-01-04 03:51 PM

uppin

K-Trin 05-01-04 04:01 PM

Uppin

DopeDelivary 05-01-04 04:11 PM

Flow- shady
Punches- Phisyque
Content- Phisyque
Vocab- Phisyque
Enjoyment- Phisyque
Multies- Physyque
Creativity- Phisyque

VOTE- Phisyque..... This was a one sided battle to me he came with a much more complicated verse... mutlies, wordplay, good vocab, and punches .... I enjoyed reading it about 100 times for that shady's cuz it actually showed some skill...


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