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Oc6 The Caustic 05-02-04 05:21 PM

Aight:
Good opener to Triple N, like he always does. Nice sense of wordplay in the first couple of lines, flowed nicley together. Good punches and ok personly's, nice verse. Jack, you had decent Punches and peronly's, but Triple N was better overall in those areas, but you had a good verse. Elevate on your Vocab, and fix up ya structure a little bit. Your a good opponent, you were just facing a better one. Vote- Triple N.

Oc6 The Caustic 05-02-04 05:23 PM

How come I can't place a poll vote?

Triple_N 05-02-04 08:05 PM

uppin for votes, well explained votes holla^^^^^^^^

L.I. 05-02-04 08:44 PM

My Vote
 
My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades"
hahahaha....funny punch...nice....9/10
This mothafucka gettin frantic, cuz I exposed his gay antics
When he see's a man ass he's more than horny, he's "enchanted"
Pretty good punch...8/10
My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page
He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds)
hahaha...9/10
Look at his sig it proves my point more, he got an ashamed gay man at his front door
He had to post it, becuz of his gay allure, I never thought I be battlin' a "manhore"
Didn't feel this too much....5/10
You can't deny this battle's mine, I got punches stacked taller than Yao ming
I'm a be charged wit a hate crime for murder him an the gay man at his front door wit a wedding ring
Decent...7/10

Verse Score : 38/50

Yo this verse was pretty dope...fell down a lil bit the last 2 bars....but u did straight....nice punches....keep elevatin in the meta's category....u had a lil multi's in there but its better than throwin useless multi's in......good solid verse...

Im about to Synchronize your ugly hidden Disguise
untill my style is jocked by you and Memorized
Decent opener...not that hard of a punch...7/10
Triple_N could never meet the Lyrical Fitness
And ill be the Number One Person to be the Witness
Wheres the punch?...5/10
So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too
Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You
Theres a hot punch...9/10
My words will Rap around ya neck Region
Clinch My flow into your brain and start Squeezin
Untill you Stop Breathin, get you allergic to my punches you start Sneezin.
Multi's...but useless ones...no good punch...6/10
Then ill bite you with my Posinous Fangs for tryin to mess with a champ
Bitch ass Emcee bleeding stains from your Period with endless Cramps
Punch?....4/10
You will neva eva Sustain
I Juss chewed yo ass up damaging your Physical Frame
Becasue getting a Win From Jack is somthin you will Never Retain
Decent punch....7/10

Verse Score : 38/60

Aight your verse didnt have many hard hitting punches....not the best performance ive seen by u....expected more.....use sum meta's and personals.....

Vote - Triple_N


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