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Good opener to Triple N, like he always does. Nice sense of wordplay in the first couple of lines, flowed nicley together. Good punches and ok personly's, nice verse. Jack, you had decent Punches and peronly's, but Triple N was better overall in those areas, but you had a good verse. Elevate on your Vocab, and fix up ya structure a little bit. Your a good opponent, you were just facing a better one. Vote- Triple N. |
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This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades" hahahaha....funny punch...nice....9/10 This mothafucka gettin frantic, cuz I exposed his gay antics When he see's a man ass he's more than horny, he's "enchanted" Pretty good punch...8/10 My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds) hahaha...9/10 Look at his sig it proves my point more, he got an ashamed gay man at his front door He had to post it, becuz of his gay allure, I never thought I be battlin' a "manhore" Didn't feel this too much....5/10 You can't deny this battle's mine, I got punches stacked taller than Yao ming I'm a be charged wit a hate crime for murder him an the gay man at his front door wit a wedding ring Decent...7/10 Verse Score : 38/50 Yo this verse was pretty dope...fell down a lil bit the last 2 bars....but u did straight....nice punches....keep elevatin in the meta's category....u had a lil multi's in there but its better than throwin useless multi's in......good solid verse... Im about to Synchronize your ugly hidden Disguise untill my style is jocked by you and Memorized Decent opener...not that hard of a punch...7/10 Triple_N could never meet the Lyrical Fitness And ill be the Number One Person to be the Witness Wheres the punch?...5/10 So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You Theres a hot punch...9/10 My words will Rap around ya neck Region Clinch My flow into your brain and start Squeezin Untill you Stop Breathin, get you allergic to my punches you start Sneezin. Multi's...but useless ones...no good punch...6/10 Then ill bite you with my Posinous Fangs for tryin to mess with a champ Bitch ass Emcee bleeding stains from your Period with endless Cramps Punch?....4/10 You will neva eva Sustain I Juss chewed yo ass up damaging your Physical Frame Becasue getting a Win From Jack is somthin you will Never Retain Decent punch....7/10 Verse Score : 38/60 Aight your verse didnt have many hard hitting punches....not the best performance ive seen by u....expected more.....use sum meta's and personals..... Vote - Triple_N |
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