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Certified 05-01-04 07:18 PM

battle was pretty one sided....flow, structure not to mention punches....so itz easy to go with Delon pretty obvious win....

that currency line deleon??? wtf....the pounds weak??? nah it aint dawg Lol....

return tha favour or get slapped.........PeaZ

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120603

E Looch 05-01-04 07:26 PM

deleon got this 1

spiky your flow was off your lines was stretched and you didnt have very good punchs in this battle try workin on not stretchi nyour lines and comin with harder punchs like you have in your other battles just stay consistent

deleon opposite of spikys nice flow good structure and decent punchs not hit really hard either but it was a better flow an structure just work on consistent strong punchs and personals

Pop Lotty 05-01-04 07:53 PM

THIS BATTLE WAS INCREDIBLY ONE-SIDED
PUNCHES:DELEON
OPEN:DELEON
FLOW:DELEON
STRUCTURE:DELEON
EVERYTHING WENT TO DELEON
FAV LINE:Theres no need to 'Shout'- I'LL give 3 votes and Im not Urgent/
Because your verse is 'washed up' like your spittin Detergent
SPIKY U NEED TO ELEVATE
VOTE:DELEON

DeLeon 05-01-04 08:02 PM

yo gotta you gonna poll your vote???????????????????

DeLeon 05-01-04 08:22 PM

Uppin............................................. ......

L.I. 05-01-04 08:28 PM

My Vote
 
Kid you aint worth the beef, your played lines aint Hurtin-Me/
& you couldnt go pound for pound with UK's Currency/
hahaha
Theres no need to 'Shout'- I'LL give 3 votes and Im not Urgent/
Because your verse is 'washed up' like your spittin Detergent/
nice
Your Flirtin with death kid, Stop playin games your not hard-fuck/
Deleon-yeah im a Smash your face in and left you star-struck/
aight
Your bars-suck & I would spit a personal about this nerd its true/
But first I have to find somebody thats even heard of you/
hahahahahahhaa
Faggot, your choosin men so Im forced to diminish this queer/
Cause around his house 'Bottoms up' doesn't mean to finish his beer/
nice

Your verse had me laughin....better than the otha spit i saw u in.....u had hot punches...funny as hell....u got a 8 out of 10....

man yo rhymes was childish that shit was senseless/
u comen at me but yo ass pennylees you got to
shop at payless/
gay
this rap i'm spitn is more like armangon aint my
rap setn/
come on man yo weak i dont u shouldn't compeat
against me/
blah
cant u see i aint no mediocre mc i'm bigest mc
that u will hear that will bring yo ass to tears
u stupid queer/
zzzz
u stay yo ass at home caus i just might break
yo bone and stone yo ass/
after that i'm gone leave yo stupid ass in a
cass then fry yo ass/
come on
be gon be gon caus i dont want to hurt to bad
to make mad/
gay

Your verse was horrible....go to tutorials and sleep over....cause u need tons of work.....

Vote DeLeon


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