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battle was pretty one sided....flow, structure not to mention punches....so itz easy to go with Delon pretty obvious win....
that currency line deleon??? wtf....the pounds weak??? nah it aint dawg Lol.... return tha favour or get slapped.........PeaZ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120603 |
deleon got this 1
spiky your flow was off your lines was stretched and you didnt have very good punchs in this battle try workin on not stretchi nyour lines and comin with harder punchs like you have in your other battles just stay consistent deleon opposite of spikys nice flow good structure and decent punchs not hit really hard either but it was a better flow an structure just work on consistent strong punchs and personals |
THIS BATTLE WAS INCREDIBLY ONE-SIDED
PUNCHES:DELEON OPEN:DELEON FLOW:DELEON STRUCTURE:DELEON EVERYTHING WENT TO DELEON FAV LINE:Theres no need to 'Shout'- I'LL give 3 votes and Im not Urgent/ Because your verse is 'washed up' like your spittin Detergent SPIKY U NEED TO ELEVATE VOTE:DELEON |
yo gotta you gonna poll your vote???????????????????
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My Vote
Kid you aint worth the beef, your played lines aint Hurtin-Me/
& you couldnt go pound for pound with UK's Currency/ hahaha Theres no need to 'Shout'- I'LL give 3 votes and Im not Urgent/ Because your verse is 'washed up' like your spittin Detergent/ nice Your Flirtin with death kid, Stop playin games your not hard-fuck/ Deleon-yeah im a Smash your face in and left you star-struck/ aight Your bars-suck & I would spit a personal about this nerd its true/ But first I have to find somebody thats even heard of you/ hahahahahahhaa Faggot, your choosin men so Im forced to diminish this queer/ Cause around his house 'Bottoms up' doesn't mean to finish his beer/ nice Your verse had me laughin....better than the otha spit i saw u in.....u had hot punches...funny as hell....u got a 8 out of 10.... man yo rhymes was childish that shit was senseless/ u comen at me but yo ass pennylees you got to shop at payless/ gay this rap i'm spitn is more like armangon aint my rap setn/ come on man yo weak i dont u shouldn't compeat against me/ blah cant u see i aint no mediocre mc i'm bigest mc that u will hear that will bring yo ass to tears u stupid queer/ zzzz u stay yo ass at home caus i just might break yo bone and stone yo ass/ after that i'm gone leave yo stupid ass in a cass then fry yo ass/ come on be gon be gon caus i dont want to hurt to bad to make mad/ gay Your verse was horrible....go to tutorials and sleep over....cause u need tons of work..... Vote DeLeon |
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