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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122401
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flow goes to Yung Caesar.Although your last line was strethced.Creativity and complexity goes to Yung Ceasar.S. Carter,I probably feel the same way as everyone when I say that we have seen enough of PAM's tis.Ur lines were not put togeither as well as Yung's.And some of ur punches seemed simple.

Vote-Yung(drop a vote in my battle)

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Young

Punchlines 7/10
Vocab 5/10
Flowz 9/10
Struture 5/10
Multi's 6/10

Overall=32

Carter

Punches 9/10
Flowz 9/10
Vocab (none)
Struture 9/10
Multi's 10/10

Overall=37

Yall Should Battle Again

Vote= Carter

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S.Carter nice verse. very good verse. i like the steps. very different. Young Caesar nice flow and multiples. S.Carter i just thought your lines were a little short. Young Caesar i liked your ver more b/c ogf these lines:

Yo honestly you trying to be a gangsta probably//
But if you going to imitate Jay you at least should come from Marcy//
From Married with the Children you was that bitch Nigga Darcy//

vote-Young Caesar

S. Carter, you may have had a chance if you got away from the "step one crap" That killed ya dogg, sounded like some new kids on the block shit. If you were going to do this, I would have expected some real hard hitting punches, which were not really evident.

Yung Caesar, your style was alright, after reading yours I thought you might be in some trouble. Try making your punches a little bit more crisp, meaning if you can take out words that you don't neccisarily need, do it! Nice verse thought,


Vote- Caesar