Uhh...is he done..? 'Cause I wanna vote on this shot fo real...

If you have the time, plz hit this up...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122351

dont wanna hear shit about this later
 

Say Its A Morning Funeral When These Fags Sent To An Early Grave
Spittin Poorly Unfelt Lyrics bout to get u deported out the home of the brave
addin records so hopefully you can get a vote an boast up ya sig
I'll put a hole in ya head big enough to claim it as an arceoligical dig
Kings you wack scientific raps and ya particles
only hold mags and shoot feds when you mad at Sports Illustrated articles
spul stop graspin dicks and go practice spittin in rewind
cause you're Wack As fuck like the words I underlined
Neither verses were even sick they got tried and accquited
case dissmissed after you admited no pain was inflicted
how the fuck did you mange that record shit is intrestin
cause Ya punches are Weak like Diabetics Missin Shots of Insulin :shocked:
Yo Spul stop sendin me P.M.'S like you Menstruatin [pms]
cause u like all the rappers from Cheltenham untalented an forgotten
hoped on the poll beggin allah for ya record to be improved
I'm 5 Steps Ahead Of U Like U My 3rd Cousin Twice Removed :shocked:
and everyone know spulls relatives are iraq rebels
i'll have ya Vital signs Pass Death like u Quarterback 4 the Devil :shocked:
an spull lovin Dada so he finally can be in C Webbs shoes
his only way of bein a sac king cause his balls half the size of cashews
Ya dudes actin like ya verse is tight but when i drop shows over
you be like but my shit was tight an they just give you a cold shoulder


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Cheltenham where kings is from if you aint notice


vote people

Holy shit...this was very close...

Spul
You had some nice punches...flow was good...personals were pretty tite...everythin' about this verse was good...but not great. I think personally you should have came a lil' harder...but overall, pretty dope verse...

7/10

Triple_N
Hmm...a lotta ya lines was played dawg...gay jokes are wack. Don't use them. Other than that, I thought your punches were pretty mediocore...pretty tite verse, coulda been better...

6/10[b]

[b]Kingz
Whoa...we have a superstar here, folks. Your punches were the shit. Your personals...amazing. Triple_N, triple newbie...haha...I laughed my ass off...and it all flowed good too. And your closer...holy shit...dope...

9/10

E-Looch
Whoa...this is going to be close between Kingz and E-Looch...your punches was tite...personals hit hard...damn...flow was damn near perfect...tite dawg...

9/10

And my vote goes to...

Team SpuL and E-Looch.

No hate...hit up my link above plz...thx...

Whoops, I mean SpuL and Kingz team...added up tha wrong people...sorry............................

Uppin for well explained votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good lookin le

Uppin

uppin for some well explained votes y'all, holla back!!

ok this was a close batle but it was hott shit well done
team triplen and elooch:
good hard punches i felt that triples really connected
both verses had fair flow they were good
my favorite line from triple:This faggot bitch is number one the "homo ranks"
This guy's asshole gets more refills than "gas tanks"
He focuses on dick harder than "sholin monks"
He sucks on more nuts than "elephant trunks"
Him an spul run the streets in their little homo groups
Those two together choke down more balls than "basketball hoops"
i liked all that and they were the best lines from this team *9*
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spul and kingz also a very hott verse
ur punches werent as good but kingz agaisnts elooch punches were goood
but i dotn think that u had better punches than triple and elooch
my favorite lines from this team
‘E’? yep you rap like you have have OD’d on ‘ecstasy’
On A trip so bad, u see ya momma next~to~me having sex~with~me
I fucked ya mum so hard…you might as well call me ‘dad’
I’ll murder you ‘son’…and still be the best ‘father’ you ever had
You look unhappy dog…you got a case of the blues?
Fuck E Looch…from now on you gonna be known as ‘E Lose’
it was a close battle but my vote goes to
triple and elooch
hard to decide nice battle yall

Vote: triple N and E Looch

Ok.. Spul your verse seemed like it was a topical where the topic was ragging on some guy... might not make sense but that's the best way I can explain it. You just had a lot of filler, it seemed like 70% of your verse was just set up lines. Oh and between the 4 of you, I don't want to hear another punch relating to the NBA or sports, because this battle alone just made that shit played as fuck.

Nobody in this battle really had a stand out verse... there were some nice lines here and there but a lot of stretched shit and filler... I feel like you guys could have gone 20 lines and made it more readable.

Looch.. your verse had some weak rhymes and you really didn't come as hard as our battle together... but still nobody really came that hard.

I think overall Triple N and kingz had the two better verses... I think they were about even but Triple N / E Looch get my vote because they had different verses... kingz and spul y'all came with the same personals... same sports punch... got kinda boring.

good lookin i know i didnt even try in this battle shit wasnt that hot to me like they sayin

spul sorry man....there weren´t any real hard hitting punches that caught my eye. your flow wasn´t good at the beginning but it improved by the end

k i gotta give this to triple n for reasons
first of all here are the negatives some shit was played but some stuff i liked
You say u mixed, well ya moms must be "no flow", an ya pops "garbage"-original
Cuz only "bush" you've seen is on the "channel 7 news"(meaning George Bush)-may be played but i like it
Your completely wack, in ya pic wit ya cap back, tryin' to be black
Lyrical skills ya lack, if ya rhymes was "O.J." they still couldn't murder a track
his multies enhanced the flow of his verse. peace no hate...good batlte

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