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Gkillaz.. Good verse good flow.. but bad punches and personals you didnt really say much about this guy at all but your were gonna kill him.. which is basically played all that gangster talk Flow Had basically the same style as gkillaz but came wit harder punches and persoanls... like dissen him for reppin d12 that funny.. Vote Flow for more personals and no its not a hate vote |
iight.. what ever.. he gots one bote now.. I have had 2.. UPPIN for more
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vote not bote.. but you get the point.. votes needed
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alright i gotta sat that gkillaz rap has good punches and rhymed good to. Flow your shit was good man it had some good rhymes and had good punches. over all though i fell as if GKillaz had a better verse with stronger punches and rhymed better
my vote Gkillaz |
iight should be 3-1 .. with his one hate vote... lol, UPPIN for more
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Ok, I've seen better from both of you guys, but it's hard to be on the same level every time, so let's work wit what we got.
Flow Intelligent: Flow: Decent, went off in a couple of places, but overall, not TOO bad Punches:OK, the thoughts/loss was was pretty good Vocab: Above The average here I'd say Personals: Coulda Came wit a harder one than the D12 one, they were decent at best. Multis: Very Good Opener: Kinda stretched second line of the bar. Decent though Closer: Pretty good man. Fav Bar: i'll damage ya plans and plots..scatter ya random thoughts// they were garbage anyway..hope u can handle this frantic loss// GKillaz: Flow:Very Solid, Steady throughout Punches: Solid, Liked the Sleep/Sheep one Vocab: Decent Personals: Pretty good. Multis: Pretty good, but he got you in this category Opener: Pretty good Closer: Alright Fav Bar: If I burried you 6 feet deep everyone could still smell your stink... Grap you by your N-Sync shirt and punch you out in one blink... Overall, It coulda been better on both ends, but it was still a very close battle, But Ima give it to GKillaz, his punches and flow were betterm as well as his personals and those are the 3 most important categories in my book, so Ima give it to GKillaz. |
iight now should be 4-1... lol, but keep em comin peeps.. and make sure your explain your votes
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no it really should be 2-1 like it is i mean look at whiteys vote...if he voted for me like that u woulda been mad and said it was a d/r or something....2-1 uppin for votes
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the multi master won this
i think flow in telligent really came hard while gk was tryin to keep up an steal his style no hate homey jus honest oppinion.....nice battle tho good competition hope both yall get better ~1~ vote intelligent |
yo Flow intelligent Ripped him so bad dat was da first time i seen him spit hott shit THAT was some hot ass shit ur Best Lines: your the next to get filled..wit my text to weak skills//
and im bout to pop ya top like a bottle of pills// I fill up dreams and replace them with nightmares// might scare your right pair of socks off and leave em right there// Dat shit was SICK as hell na j/p GKillaz u did aight but Flow took this 1 u need better punches to win dis wun but flow got this in da BAg BREAK DOWN Gkillaz05 FLow 7/10 Rhymes 8/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 5/10 26/40 FLow intelligent Flow 8/10 Rhymes 10/10 Structure 8/10 Punches9/10 35/40 Good SHIT homies nice battle |
ok, lets see...
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt, ya flowed really well, and ya had a few stabs that were more witty than hard hittin. Actually, I'll take that back, nearly all of ya stabs were witty and some incorporated wordplay, but the truth is, the punches were weak. You need to maintain the clever wordplay and witty stabs, while adding a little more bite, the kinda disses that make crowds go 'ohh!!!' killer lines are the order of the day man, you got intelligence and flows, that is the last thing you need to work on before ya really tear shit up. GKillaz05, just like FlOw InTeLLiGeNt, ya had clever stabs, but not as clever as him. A lot of ya shit was filler, saying he moves slow like a slug is an excuse for a rhyming word, try changing it to 'point ma barrell in ya mouth and force feed ya slugs', as in shotgun slugs. I know when ya freestylin or got small time limits, ya cant really go back and improve shit, so just try to think of the harder shit while ya still typing. You also had pretty weak punches, but quite a bit stronger than FlOw InTeLLiGeNt, such as the sleeping pill line. ya flow was slightly worse, but still pretty smooth. GKillaz05 gets my vote, his flow was worse but he just squeaked through with the harder stabs. Peace, if ya got a problem with my vote, PM me |
uppin for votes will return the favor
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okay the break first up gkillaz
You call yourself the Multi Master but to me they just a disaster... Im gun re-build you and then murdera you, hide ya in the plaster...6...stupid..not really original Yo homie cant you move any faster?.. Your moving like a slug... Just like the bug, Im the thug.. your flow is on a cheap drug...6.5 hmm..decent not really original or funny though Gotta fill up my coffee mug becuz your flow put me to sleep... Flow Sleepin Pill is your new name cuz everyone is countin Sheep... Driving you in the back seat up my keep.. burry you 20 feet deep...not a fan of the rhyming concept....7 heard it If I burried you 6 feet deep everyone could still smell your stink... Grap you by your N-Sync shirt and punch you out in one blink...5...boo stupid...so far the only thing that's been on is the flow Flow is runnin to his shrink got him scared right outta his mind... Combined between a women and a fag, he loves in in the behind...4 are you serious...seriously man...say something funny This guy is tryin to be tough but he aint even from rochester... Thats just a cover up cuz Im the King and you are my Jester...[ Why should I try?.. flow is blowing up himself like uncle fester...4 boo,...that's really all i have to say...how'd you get such a good record...seriously So this is the last line... and I got Flow all ripped into pieces... Got him desiced... now watch as this guys record decreases...6...hmm now for flow...i hope its better... aiight check it..... gkillaz tried to impress...now be tried by the best// my punches ride through ya flesh...hope ya supplied wit a vest//6 hmm...i hate that kindof rhyme...hardcore shit i'll descibe in my text why my skill is possesed// flow intelligent attack ya back till ya side is repressed//6...smart...well smarter then anything so far i'll damage ya plans and plots..scatter ya random thoughts// they were garbage anyway..hope u can handle this frantic loss//6 decent...good flow...not good punch my hazardous verbs and words fuck up ya vision i hope you see well// whats the difference between herbs and nerds.. herbs wear D12//8 boom that's okay...hahah i saw that pic too... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119342 your the next to get filled..wit my text to weak skills// and im bout to pop ya top like a bottle of pills//5 stupid... I fill up dreams and replace them with nightmares// might scare your right pair of socks off and leave em right there//7 haha that's okay...it original atleast fight bare, knuckles with no chuckles, I leave off the gloves// I feed off you cuz, Im a vampire that likes to feed off ya blood//6.5 decent...kinda played...but worded well please gkillas your record and skills is not at all a threat// like jump shots wit no rim..this dude is all net//6 played...but decent... well it all adds up to i like gkillaz verse less...there was only one funny line in the whole battle...but it's all good ya dig... honest shit not hate respect to both emcees v- flow |
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gkillaz tried to impress...now be tried by the best//
my punches ride through ya flesh...hope ya supplied wit a vest// i'll descibe in my text why my skill is possesed// flow intelligent attack ya back till ya side is repressed// ^^ good opener...but, the attack ur side line coulda hit harder with a better finish...decent tho and im bout to pop ya top like a bottle of pills// ^^^ kidna played and corny...jus a little please gkillas your record and skills is not at all a threat// like jump shots wit no rim..this dude is all net// ^^^^ decent closer man... 1...work on better punches...ur flow and rhyming are nice UM... You call yourself the Multi Master but to me they just a disaster... Im gun re-build you and then murdera you, hide ya in the plaster... ^^ it rhymes...but it doesn't make much sense in the way of a punch If I burried you 6 feet deep everyone could still smell your stink... Grap you by your N-Sync shirt and punch you out in one blink... ^^best part of that was the N-Sync reference...everything else was corny So this is the last line... and I got Flow all ripped into pieces... Got him desiced... now watch as this guys record decreases... ^^ wtf is desiced? u mean deceased? iono...blah-zay closer Flow: Tie Rhymes: Flow Punches: Flow Vote: Flow |
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