marvelous won this battle

everything was marvelous ... from personals to multis to punches to structure


P ur shit was herbish off the hook B you need to elevate your vocab a Lot!!

Vote = Marvelous

aight uppin 4 more votes........wake da fukk up ya'll

Very Poorly Done Ill Way Off Track Started Ok But Then Tailed Drastically Off Course
Marv Solid Rymes Wordplay And Punchlines As You Know We Can All Elevate Decent Job Tho
Vote.marv

goodlookin dunn......more votes ppl......................

aighht ummm can dis battle get closed 2day ppl im tired of uppin dis shit

Yo, this was a very easy battle.

punchlines - M
creativity - M
wordplay - M
structure - none
flow - M

This was all marvolous. P, your punchlines and flow was boring as hell. You need to really work on that. Marvolous, work on your wordplay wit more metaphors.

v-M

who wants to battle me????????????????????/
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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i think marv took dis battle cause his punches hit harder and he was more personal.
perpetu,your lines were real shitty,so i dont think you win this one,and also,some of your stuff had the shittiest rhyming everwitth rhymes like:wtf? is up with the name, are you trying to be cool?
or are you just stupid?.... saying you're sick, is just being a fool
see what i mean?
so my vote goes to marvolous.