CJ - surprised me.. dropped alot better than previously.. minus the 'dick in the barrel' line it was all pretty fresh an occasionally witty.. avoid all 'sex/dick/gay' lines like the plague.. your rhyme scheme is rather basic and altho` your structure is stable you could improve the flow by switchin` to shorter bars an a few multiple rhymes.. also you could tell you wrote for your opponent.. personals thruout.. not bad overall..

KB - started off disgustingly.. with a wack 'sex' line.. stretched bars for the whole verse killed any flow.. there were no personal punches in your verse.. coulda been dissin` anyone.. nothin` stood out as effective cos it was jus a bunch of random metas.. you need to focus on tailorin` your verse to diss your opponent specifically..

v/ CJ.

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Can a nigga get some votes? Well, either of us, howeva it's goin' down. Just fuckin' vote!

Wow.. this battle getting mad slepped on... aight check it. CJ, you brought some tight lines:

"So let me free, better than you and I'm sayin' "Not Another One,/
Another "gangsta" rapper, I'm just like damn, not another Gun./
Fam, how much you know about guns? I bet you got a glock,/
U stick your dick in the barrel, so you can say you got it "cocked"./
It's a shame, you rappers all the same, & I'm changin' the game,/
Your style is lame, only place you get an extra W is in your name./ "

That whole thing was pretty tight, and you opened with a decent line and then a personal. Killah.. you came decent... kinda stretched it with that mex-i-can thing, but CJ just brought fire. Nice drop man, keep doing your thing.

v/ CJ

return the favor w/ a vote on my battle w/ marv....

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Can someone vote on this shit, it's been open for a fuckin' minute. Damn, niggaz want cats to battle in elevated, then not vote. WTF?

~CJ~

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cj ya opener was pretty sick good punch and personal nice flow and your closer damn heat sick closer on him good punch and tight personal and the rest of your verse was nice good wordplay and all sick personals the gun line was real seriuos nikka hot shit tight verse only thing i can say is just try to upp some vocab in there all threw out

killah bwoy your opener was stretched out still the set up line was good wordplay the punch didnt really connect to me closer was sick though good wordplay and punch in both lines hot shit and the rest of your verse was all long lines my nikka what happened since you battled me lol some punchs were good and some werent even reached out an touchin nothin you was creative and had good wordplay but not solid punchs to me need to bring those back and keep everything you had in this verse be pretty sick

vote cj