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Willa 05-04-04 11:31 PM

tony
Flow:1/10 usin the same word 2 make shit rhyme is herbish work on ur flow
vocabulary:4/10 nothin really good bawsic wrok on it
punches:4/10 ok didnt hit very hard and was played
creativity:2/10 like i said above played work on it
opener:2/10 gay didnt flow and didnt hit
closer:5/10 pretty good but played
overall:18/60
work on all i stated then ull b better u need mad elevation

Supreme:
Flow:8/10 flow was really good
vocabulary:5/10 needs work but had more complex words than tony
punches:6/10 i feel ur punches hit pretty hard
creativity:7/10 u actually came pretty creative good job
opener:5/10 2nd line was good but didnt really like the 1
closer:3/10 wasnt feelin it was kinda played
u could work on ur vocab and structure a lil ur flow was good good verse overall
overall:34/60
u get my vote u had better everything except 4 ur closer

BigTony.Self 05-04-04 11:52 PM

yo bitch ive seen your shit... just another dick riding vote i wouldn t battle you for the fact that my name next to yours depriciates my value ..........DickRidah

$$UPREME 05-05-04 12:17 PM

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$$UPREME 05-06-04 03:46 PM

Y Did 2 Votes Get Dq'd....
They Were Both Explained

$$UPREME 05-07-04 12:01 PM

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~uppin 4 Votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

EyeDEA 05-07-04 12:23 PM

Supreme: I like ur flow it was amusing and made me laugh as well as creative on constructing punches nice job and goos vocab as well as closer not so well on the opener but you could change that by elevation overall i give you a 7/10

Tony self
Nothing really impressed me and the dick punches are getting old now OK punches on the rest but u need to elevate as well as structure but good shit kinda a close one overall i give you a 6/10

Vote: $$upreme

LyricalMethod 05-07-04 01:03 PM

nice verse supreme you took this easy. your verse was short but you had nice punches and multiples. you got this easily.

Da Vinci 05-07-04 04:39 PM

Alright return the favour I'm vote'n on this right now http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892
Da Vinci vs infamous j

Da Vinci 05-07-04 04:48 PM

TONY
Flow:5/10
Wordplay:4/10
vocabulary:5/10-kinda weak but I'ma still give it a 5
punches:4/10-needed more and harder hitting punches
creativity:4/10-rattles battels shit is played o-u-t
opener:4/10-like the way you were thinking but needed to polish it up
closer:7/10-a decent punch

overall:33/70



Supreme:
Flow:4/10-maybe more flow next time
wordusage:6/10-decent
vocabulary:7/10-way to mix it up
punches:8/10- good punches, and there were consistent all the way through
creativity:6/10
opener:6/10- I like the lights out part the first line was just alright
closer:7/10-Thats a nice closer, on a strong note

overall:44/70


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