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Lyrical Demon 04 05-08-04 12:01 AM

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Lyrical Demon 04 05-08-04 06:36 PM

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Lyrical Demon 04 05-09-04 11:01 AM

uppin 4 votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-09-04 06:38 PM

uppin dis shit n

e.coli 05-09-04 07:28 PM

damn......whack battles are always hard to judge......im gonna have to give this one to spikey......he tried to make some good punches......both of u need to stop tryin to rhyme so much and work on your punches.....and spikey shorten up your lines........u both need the whackness emergancy center.......

v/spikey

2Face 05-12-04 09:22 PM

uppin 4 votes man
uppin for votes people
uppin fo votes person

DFrost 05-12-04 10:52 PM

aight
 
ok, lyrikal, self glorification lines don't get ya anywhere on this site, ya gotta do punches, should read the forums, best bar
spikey yo ass garbage my lil cousin better than you
you dont need to be rappin,let alone rap in a crew
just come with more shit like that but better

spiky- ok, a breakdown... did any of your lines make sence? they were meaningless punches, nothing but some words that rhymed and gibberish in between them.
nigga my momma sick so go suck on a dick u
stupid bitch/
nope, nada, u can rhyme sick, dick, and bitch, great.
i know my rap sick caus u wouldn't even be tryn
to spit prick/
third line rhymin, nah never do that
my raps is so serious it will make yo fagot ass so
delirious/
that....... ok ya just kinda left that one out there
it's like your a cold and i'm tha potion to wipe yo
ass wipe out so what u about
woah... can you even remember what you were tryin to do with that?
yo name make no sense caus yo ass penniless u
cant even eat at denny's nless u is a fuckn sucess
stupis pest/
Ok, i get it, his names stupid so obviously he is poor and can't eat at denny because he isn't successful... and hes annoying, if it is even possible to put all that shit together it'd take more than two lines
you talkn about my momma but yo momma is OSAMA/
nah, not doin it,
so leave my momma out of this caus i'll piss on u
like a dog and tie yo ass to a log/
nope...
i'm fin to beat yo ass and make u look like a fuckm
frog/nada
see all u is, is a waste time and space so leave b4 i
spray yo ass wit some mass/mace i think? right
anyway u didn't rhyme half of it and none of it made sense

vote- lyrical

and a classic line
"you talkn about my momma but yo momma is OSAMA"

Lyrical Demon 04 05-12-04 10:55 PM

upppppppppppppppppppppin for votes

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-13-04 12:04 AM

spiky won this cause he had better punchs then lyrical demon u made kno sence nigga

Break down

Spiky
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
structure 3/10
punches 5/10
19/40

Lyrical Demon
Flow4/10
Rhymes 3/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 4/10
16/40


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