yo infamous j ya crazee dunny lmaoooo....but i could see u wanan give me hate cuzz i aint vote 4 u okay

IP: 3240 794D


beefin with jay? nah u not able da size of my gun a make u tear quick-
u "take bars from da cat in da outlaws" datz y they call u "fatal lyrikzz"-
(think about it)

^^ QUIT WIT DA DAMN "GET IT" stuff...lol..decent opener tho


after im done clappin da ratchett,ya fam a be at ya wake grabbin ya casket-
quit rap u just makin a "ass" out yaself on da "net" like u "sat in da basket"-


^^ Nice wordplay

dunny but after i "bus(t)" all u gettin is a "1 way ticket" da hell-
ya boys aint gon be "throwin pennie's in water" but they gon be in a hospital "wishin" u "well"-
^^ solid closer w/more good wordplay




From: CaLiFoRniA !!!!!!!
Status: Online
IP: 6C7A 3231


Fatal Is My Game Aint Believe Me Read My Name
Actin Like You Dont Know After This U Better Run FOr Shame

Decent opener...

Aiyo dawg, SPELLING YOUR NAME OUT DOWN THE LEFT SIDE OF YOUR VERSE IS GAY AND POINTLESS, NOT TO MENTION UNORIGINAL AND PLAYED.


Flow Tie
RHymes Mar
Punches Mar


Vote: MARV

3-1 Ok Yo MArv Thats Not K.O Right Cuz I Got A Vote....And U SAID FIRST 2 3-0 But Right Now Its 3-1

The Breakdown..........

Punches: Marvelous..... ur shit was koo u had better punches,fatal was too loose he wasnt hittin as hard
Flow: that was a tie both flows were off yall were pausin between lines and shit so elevate on that
wordplay: Marvelous i like you wordplay it was hott, fatal i didnt like how you bolded out your letter that gets annoyin i got told something about that because i used to do that and i stopped so elevate on that

so im gonna have to give this battle to marvelous for having more in his spit plus his punches came harder than fatals
V=Marvelous

ALSO I VOTED ON THIS SPIT CAN YALL CLOSE THIS BATTLE OF MINE ITS OLD AS HELL!!!!!!!! but can yall vote on it(thanks for repayin the favor)
heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=111956

aight uppin 4 more votes ppl.............................

Marvelous came wit a battle verse and F/L wuz more of a poem style to it.
Marv your punchez and wurd play wuz very nice.
But F/L I liked your creativity.


vote Marvelous J