E Looch |
05-12-04 12:49 PM |
lol wow check it
countreejay your opener was decent good wordplay in it punch was ok and your closer was nice i sen what you was gettin across nice closer and the rest of your verse was pretty consitent with nice punchs only thing is try to drop the coma thing slows up the flow kinda this verse was kinda basic stuff but still nice drop
adamoto um wtf?? half of that shti didnt even rhyme kid get ya rhyme scheme right and then go with punchs cause if it dont rhyme it dont flow an then it basically dotn get felt just elevate brah
vote countreejay
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