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-   -   Infamous J \V/ (S) Da Vinci (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=122892)

Inception 05-08-04 10:58 PM

dick ridin him? i dotn even know son he just killed you kid get it over it stay on your level

Infamous J 05-08-04 10:59 PM

and i live up to my vatar



hhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Infamous J 05-09-04 12:06 AM

da vinci be as wack as elliott, missy

Da Vinci 05-09-04 03:41 AM

Who the fuck do you THINK you are kid?? I don't even need dick ride'n votes, NEWS FLASH!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats the only way your gonna get one. You gotta learn to take a loss, know when your over your head, theres people on this site who can rip me cause they been do'n it longer, and that goes the same for you, Ya gotta learn to sink before you can swim.

No dick ride'n but man I will take this one, accept it thats just the way it goes, why do you think when I put the challenge out I said no newb's I'm not a vet, but I know I'm not a newb.

Da Vinci 05-09-04 12:09 PM

Up'n this shit to the top, vote on ours drop a link I'll vote on yours, honest ones only.

Optimal 05-09-04 12:15 PM

da vinci got this heat had better punches flow and vocab overall he pretty much murder dude.infam u need to work on punches and ur rhymin scheme u als need 2 quit tryin to sway votes you'll be alright if u lose 1 juss rematc instead of spammin the forum.

My vte: da vinci

please drop an honest vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123052

Da Vinci 05-09-04 04:04 PM

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Da Vinci 05-09-04 04:08 PM

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Da Vinci 05-09-04 08:23 PM

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-SwizZ- 05-09-04 08:34 PM

Infamous J's Verse

yo da vinci?, i read history books and i got news
i read that you got a 10 year old lover, is that true?
Whack Personal No Punch 2\10
you don't need no telescope to understand my wordz
all i need to invent is rhymes to kill these stupid herbs
Its An Alright Line 4\10
i know you so much all i need is 10 bars to finish you off
ya names da vinci, that's all an opponent needs to know that you soft
4\10 Again Ok
i'm da new edison cauze when you read my lines it generates light
and this is da 21th century where you might die wit da cauze of a fight
Not Good 1\10
i'm finish you i don't need to wryte no more
yeah yeah, go away no thanx fa suckin my dick, whore
Whack Man 0\10
Overall Whack But Good Flowed Verse

Da Vinci's Verse
PREVIOUS VERSE IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU READ
“RAP FOR DUMMIES”
Shit I’ve seen better punches and metta’s from the telletubies
Funny Line 6\10
My verse gets ya girl so wet, she thinks she lives in an aquariam
This cat claim he seen beef but chew’s on herbs like a vegetarian,
Nice Syllable Nice Flow Beautiful 7\10
And judging by ya text record you’ve been chockin on dem herbs
Only way you’ll get a vote if its “Infamous J vs Infamous J” that’s my word
Ok Line 5\10
Now this line here will have ya do’n a handstand outta this place
So you can draw eyes and a nose above your asshole just to save face
Whack Line but Flowed Good 5\10
I got a PHd for hit keys, so you call me the locksmith
You perceive you beat’n me? (Didn’t hear my glock-click?)
Worst Line From You 2\10

OVerall THis IS A Onesided Battle

V\Da Vinci

e.coli 05-09-04 08:38 PM

da vinci takes this easily........he murdered J with nice punches metas and creativity.....J u need to elevate a lil bit.....read some of the elevated battles to help u get better.....your punches were really weak.....thats why u lost

Killuminatic 05-10-04 04:07 AM

J it looked like u did a little too much studying man. Shit wasnt personal it was about a dude whose been dead hundreds of years, and the shit that wasnt almost didnt make any sense. Structure was alright but ya lines got too long toward the end. Da vinci i liked ya shit man. Hit hard and flow was tight. It wasnt the best but J needs to practice a little more. Da vinci gets my vote

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