This was a WEEK battle.. but I gotta give my vote to Thug.. he had better strutcue and his flow was better.. he also had punches unlike darrk who didnt have any of the following.. Darrk.. you need some work.. make your lines like his.. and make sure that they ryme.. and that will help out your flow too...

RETUN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123020

thnx g,uppin 4 mo votes.......................

uppin 4 votes.............

Darrk-What can I say.Was it even a rap.Terrible structure.It was hard to know what it was by the way u wrote it.I didn't evn notice the rhyme schmeme.Terrible.
Best LIne-n/a
Worst LIne-n/a

Thugzy-Not a really good flow,but better than the essay Darrk wrote.U had at least a rhyme scheme and punches that was noticeable,so U easily won this.
Best Line-i drop bars like bush drop bombs on iraq/
but when i drop,i hit ma target,so kid watch ya back/
Worst Line-aight,look,im bout to spit this shit/
dark,tha limelights on me,no one can see u bitch/

Vote-Thugzy
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123107
^^drop a vote in my battle


And one last thing,the reason u got no other votes is cause of the thread title.Nobady gonna go in a thread called 'Thugzy Come".So you got to vote in my battle,cause I'm the only one to vote in this shit.

uppin 4 votes...............

aight dark...heres one hint!!!SET UP UR STRUCTUR BETTER AND SET UP UR SPIT BETTER SO NEXT TIME I DON'T HAVE TO READ IT HARD AGEN!!!!SHYT

aight dark..ur spit sucked...there was only one punch..but it still sucked...u need ta uppin ur vocab dawg cuz really it isn't good at all...

thugzy finally u do somethin wit a win...thugzy ur spit was still wack but u had jst enough flow to beat him..not punch..it's flow..

aight uppin this weak shit,i know,we spat this out in bout 10 seconds,jus drop a vote.

It didn't really matter that Dark droped 2 verses neither of them had as good as puches and flow like Thugzy's did. Nice punches I like the opener. Dark you need to go into a bar structure there's a reason almost everyone drops like that, only vets are the exception. Develop your punches as well get more creative and cut out the words you don't need.

aight,safe g,uppin this............

MERRRRKKKKEDDDDDDDD..nuff said but i cant vote cuz we in da same crew but thugsy u merked dat bitch

uppin 4 votes.............................

thugzy u just murdered this kat,
darkk you need to step it up next time

This battle was week, i take back about thugzy murdering him and all, but darkk dindnt have hardly anthing on thugzy

Thugzy i give my vote to you ,
Return the fava The_Chosen_One vs. TonySelf

I cant vote yet, but im trying to get enough post
being new and all