yeh ill vote on this now...

that battle was close...

gkillaz: i thought that your rhymez were ill, your punches were good and it flowed really well.

best line:I hurt him emtionally he gun go cry and run to hid momma....
Talking about you the man but 'H'atings 'O'ur 'Only' 'D'rama...

worst line: non i liked em all

i give you 8/10.


general hood: aight i thought that this rhyme was good aswell, you flowed well and your punched were good.

best line:fuk com'n n i'll pop u from outside of ya house//
u ready fa war? den take off dat fukin "Blouse"//(WOO!!)

i thought that line was funny, and it was a good finisher.

worst line:i'm da best know dat and respect it,i'm more den a death wish,i'll snatch ya necklace,and it wont b shit ta say cuz ya fukin ass is breathless//

it was ok but i wasnt really feelin it.

i give u 7.5/10

i thought this battle was really close, but i think ill have to give it 2 gkillaz cos i think he got the better of u...

aight i dropped an honest vote now general hood can u vote on my battle with killa poizen?

yoooo shit y did u put the battle as 100 posts i can vote on dis cos i only got like 40 posts try n change it 2 20 posts so i can vote.

I cant change it.. sorry.. thx for the vote though... sorry for not saying about the 100 thing firrst..I didnt want no newbie votes.. sorry

o ight den get at me when dis shit is done i'm out fa now i'm jus lookin arround at shit........

its aight i thought dat battle was tight thought good luck both of u!

thx plustwo... and iight General.. thx for the battle man.. it was tight

dont need many more votes.. so lets keep em comin...

yea less get it poppin more votes more votes (damn...g u here dat crowd??) lol more fukin VOTES!! lol one....nice battle tooo

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Okay,GKillaz had the better flow in this shit,I reallt don't like the perfect square structure,but ur verse still flowed.General,you need to get more personals and better rhyme shceme.Ur verse just didn't flow well either.Try to keep it the same # of sllyables for each line.U weren't that bad,just keep working and then challenge GKillaz again.

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Both of you hit up a vote in my battle

gkillaz-Alrigh punches.....Definitly came harder...
PLus your structure was better....Keep up
with the similies and metephores....I liked the
complexity.......ALso very understandable
Work on punches a lil more and keep elevatin....

Hood-No....all you talked about is what you are
goin to do....Hit punches on him....Few weak punches
none was hard.....Structure was alright....Keep up
with the similies and metaphores....Work on complexity
and vocab.....Keep everything decent and keep
elevatin
v/gkillaz

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