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Untitled - Alright spit man.. good vocab... alright flow..and some good punches.

best Line - the calculator your using is outta batteries//
your style is commercial you were made from factories//

Worst Line - this guys already threatnin wid guns and shit, even his name thinks he's every1's 'savior'//
this guy's a hoax, his old folks wont reckognise him after i slit his throat with my lyrical razors//

CJ - good spit man.. good flow goin on.. good punches and all around good verse.

Best Line - his rhymes drown on dry land...his only boxing is duckin, watchim ignore
but how could he have cold feet...when untitled didnt even get to shore?

Worst Line - ever heard of biggie and pacs fait...fuck them, ima make him deader
his document isnt swept, its blank...couldnt even make it to the header

OVERALL - I have to give this battle to CJ for better punches... and way better flow.. the other guy needs to work on his flow alot... and get some harder punches.

VOTE - CJ

RETURN THE Fav
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122983

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C got this he came harder inthe subjecs he need at
times ur flow was off but ur punchs helped that out
u had a nice verse.Untitled u shit was ok u need to
expand ur ideas and make sure u exampes mak since.

My Vote: Cesus jhist

cumon ppl, uppin for vote, looks like a definate loss.

though that doesnt stop oyu guys from votin.

peac

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cesus merked him plain n simple with an o.k verse, but thats all it needed, the other kid was wack he flow was off n did he even atempt to punch?

v/cesus

will ya drop an honest vote on the battle below, peace
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121205

cesus is the victor... clearly... your verse lacked punches until the end, but that closer alone was better than - untitled - verse put together... and the 10/4 line was funny if nothing else.

- untitled - .. work on using hard hitting punches.. use metahs... work on fixing your structure. elevate.