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Yo,this was a hot battle.When I read GKillaz's verse(which was not as good as his other's)I was like "Damn,he won this",but then Raw came with this nice verse then I was like DAMN!
GKillaz-Nice flow/structure as usaul.Punches were not as hard as ur other verses.But still good.The only problem with it,was that it was simple. Best line-This guy should copy his whole verse and press delete... Take a seat and watch me give him his second defeat... Worst Line-Im a Magician they way I pull these punches outta my sleeve... You might not belive it but everyone wants you to leave... ^^see,this was what I was talking about when I said you were simple Raw-another hot verse.Flow was good,but better by GKillaz.Punches were nice as well. Best Line-Nice sig dogg, behind the times, update your shit... Stop reppin DP, beggin her for votes, ridin her clit... Worst line-none Overall-Hard choice but Raw got this.But I must say.But GKillaz,I could see this was not ur best.I don't know if you underestimated Raw,....but RAW came hard. Vote-RAW |
iight.. honest vote.. keep em comin' peepz.. UPPIN for VOTES
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break doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooown
gkilla um that opener was pretty stupid maybe reword it and use it against him but um it was a self glorifcation line an it aint work to well an ya closer wasnt fealin it either again not well worded and ja rule aint sorry just to let you know wo no points there either but the rest of your verse was pretty good the middle stayed pretty consistent wit good punchs and personals had a good flow to it to nice drop overall raw talent or who ever you are under that alias your opener was nice decent punchs and all and the closer was decent tried a personal didnt fully connect to me but the rest of your verse was average a few personals and punchs didnt really see any that stood out to me just average punchs that stayed consistent ya verse just lacked creativitie and strong punchs not bad though vote gkillaz |
ok i think g under estimated raw but i belive he still won
gkillaz05 punches 8/10 flow 8/10 structure 8/10 overall*8* bestline: This guy should copy his whole verse and press delete... Take a seat and watch me give him his second defeat... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ raw punches/7/10 flow 8/10 strcutuer 8/10 overall *7.5* bestline:-Nice sig dogg, behind the times, update your shit... Stop reppin DP, beggin her for votes, ridin her clit... my vote gkillaz |
aight honest vote rite here
opener-g even tho dat shit was weak..raw u should made ya shit more harder..pause structure- a tie punchlines-g creativity-g multi's-nun personal's-g...da anme flip was hott enjoyed-g...he got dis shit he went harder and he took all catagories...raw ya shit wasn't wack u just need a few more battles tthen you'll get da hang of dis battlin shit my vote-g http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122964 ^^^^link 2 my battle rite can y'all pleez return da honest vote...GON |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892 return the favour
Opener- Tie you both had some nice openers Flow- Another close call but Raw Punches- I'ma go with Raw here as well but it was pretty close, you both threw alot and they all stuck but I think his hit harder Personals- Close call but Killaz with breaking down the RAW Complexity- Kept it simple but pretty good this time Mettas- RAW takes this one with the some nice lines in the mid of his verse Finisher- Raw cause it was more concise Overall- Raw takes this one, very close battle expect it to go 4-4 Vote- Raw |
iight another good HONEST VOTE! ... keep em comin.. no shit un-explained ones plz!!
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Both Verses Good.. Raw talent, Can spit first time i seen him, but he had good Punchlines and Structure, good flow
Killas verse was DOpe as well also good structure, FLow n Puinchlines.. weak opening but the rest cover's it It's a Hard choice.. but i'ma ahve to go with Gkilla... His shit juss standed out more V/Gkilla |
raw talent takes this.....he came with some force......his punches landed very well.....g killaz u had a few good lines but u need to work on wording your bars to make them more effective.......and u both should try to get some better personals in your verses.....
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Pleaze Take Time And Vote On MY Battle +Krario Vs. NY State Of Mind+ This Battle Waz Close But I Know Who Came Up With More Blows GKilla Did Good And His Flow Waz Kinda Good Raw Talent Waz Good Also But U Had 2 Try More Harder My Honest Rating... Opener...GKilla Flow...GKilla Blows...GKilla Lyricism...Gkilla Finisher...GKilla Good Battle, GKilla Raw Talent Needs 2 Jab More Harder Then That 2 Win A Match Vote On My Battle |
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