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Stop swaying, and everyone stop fucking freeposting. if I was the one running this league, this would be the bullshit i would take care of first. |
whoa...damn.......i mean,king's verse wasnt all that good........the mom banned u from the computer line was ok cuz i saw he really posted that lol...but damn,if restricted is a biter,than ban him lol.........they mentioned he bit under c rabbit and r rated.....ban him........plus he aint that good anyway i've seen him spit ...lol
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I Bite Back In The Day....Man Mad Peeps On My Dick Bout Dat...
Anyways...Dropping Soon ~R~ |
Alright....Check It...
Aiyo...3.....2.....1.... Challenging Me Is Like Walking On Glass, And Your Style Straight Sucks Ass, Yo Kid, You Getting Served Like White-Colar Parties, My Spits Full Of High-Class/ I'll Bash and Stash Your Brain, Till You Mentally Unbalanced Rythmatically, Stagerdly, Your Cerebrum Flow Is Losing Votes Like Bush's Campaign, Dramaticly/ Rapping In Stradegy, Blowing This Kid Outta The BattleField, Leaving You Wet, Don't Complain Kid, Cause I Would Merk You The Same In Life Like I Do On Da Net/ Kid Please Don't Spit, Cause Your Punches Hitting Like A Deranged Turtle, Short and Slow, Re$tricted Cumming Hard, Now Watch This Bitch Gurgle/ You Think I'm Nice, Just Because Re$tricted Sparing Ya Life? Nah Kid, I'm Spitting Half My Skill, While You Spitting In Strife/ This Win I'ma Kife, Razor-Sharp Lyrics Slicing You Like Knifes, Zeebra For Halloween, Only Time This Fake Thug Will Be Covered In Stripes/ My Ryhmes Sufficating Ya Flow and Diminishing Ya Chances At This, Knew You Was My Bitch When You Held My Dick While I Was Taking A Piss/ Reminising With Bliss, Re$tricteds The Champ, My Belt Shinnin In Gliss, Time You Get The Taste Of A Champion, Is When I Give You My Ass To Kiss/ I Must Be Seeing With X-Ray Vision, The Way I'm Looking Straight Threw You, Your Just An Act, Never Defeating Anyone Worth Mentioning, Blew True To You/ In A Tempermental Mood, My Spit Molding Your Body, Like An Acidic Pool, Every Weak Punch You Spit Someone Will Ridicule, Yo Dog Its Pitiful/ This Kids Title Run Getting Cut Short, Just Like I Did To Enygma, Throw Away Your Mic and Retire, Realize RB Just Doesn't Need Ya/ This Herb, Spitting Garbage, Thats Why His Breath Is So Foul, This Cat Spit, and The Crowd Dropped In Lines For A Whole Mile/ Need To Realize Your Avatar Is Gay, WTf Possed Ya Mind, Must Be Dem Elementry Kids, That Explains The Style Of Your Ryhmes/ Sorry To Disappoint You Bitch, But You Never Stood A Chance, Knew You Full Of Shit, But When You Seen Me You Had An Aroma In Your Pants/ You Thought You Spit Hot, Until You Saw The Flames I Deployed, Thanks To Your Spit, Dirtboy Put Up A "Weak Spit, Please Do Avoid"/ As Soon As You Dispersed, I Heard Bells-Ringing and The Sight Of A Hearse, Is This Kid Serious, Did He Just Take A Shit Or Was That His True Verse?/ Match My Skill?, Nah Kid You Couldn't, Would Take Mircale Answered Wish, Thought You Was Tight, But Now I Can Plainly See That Dog Your Just A Bitch/ Yea...Thats Whats Up... ~R~ |
"Knew You Was My Bitch When You Held My Dick While I Was Taking A Piss"
lol thats pretty funny,....but,i dont know any straight dude's who'd brag about something like that......... well,u ADMIT u used to bite....well dude u should have been banned then,therefore u really shouldnt be on here now.......i can tell u couldnt have bitten this verse,cuz it was mediocre at best...........maybe i'll brake the whole battle down later......but my opinion u shouldnt even be on here.............im out |
breakdown for kingz:
flow:pretty good no off spots everything rhymed well and there wasn't really streched bars 7/10 volcab:solid use some of the better here i've seen in the league this week 7/10 punches:nice job here addressing restricted almost everyline some good name flips and personals my fav,"You avatar explains…that even ya pet rabbit is putting holes in ya chest" funny that ja rule line was good at the start too, just cause i hate ja rule and all good job here 8/10 overall:22/30 breakdown for restricted: flow:not as good as i've seen towards the end of the verse your bars were still streched too hell but lacked a great deal of the multis that made it good in weeks before and even in the first have of this verse you still gets points here cause it all rhymed and had some good internal rhyming at the start 6/10 volcab:a step down from weeks past i think i expected alot more from you with the week off and telling me you had your verse written on sunday anyway still pretty good 7/10 punches:not as many as kingz had but yours for what you had were stronger best line,"This Kids Title Run Getting Cut Short, Just Like I Did To Enygma," just cause it got at two people at once good job 7/10 overall:20/30 vote--real close battle but i see kingz taking it he really came out this week with some nice ass punches |
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Told you |
Why does Restricted make up words?
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My Vote Goes To....
Here is how it goes For Kingz: [/QUOTE] [/QUOTE]Opening: Statement about Ja Rule was true at least... I think the opening could've been stronger though. Flow: I liked how all of your words connected... Everything rhymed... and everything fit well... Vocab: Normal vocab here: It wasnt the greatest ever but it was far from bad. You don't need a heavy vocab to win battles in my opinion. Punches: His punches were minimal but I liked a couple of them. The cocaine addict line was pretty good. I also liked how you mentioned he used to bite because this well probably come up in a lot of votes. Mostly everything was basic here though... Nothing really got me out my seat or nothing... Closing: I was feeling the Contradickted line. Good closing in my view. As For Restricted: Opening: Basic Rhyming Style here.... rhymed glass with ass and class.... Nothing speical Flow: That long word shit dont impress me. It looks good but it don't show me nothing. Only person i give props to for doing that is Canibus. I do liked though how everything came together to rhyme and everything connected pretty well. Punches: The Haloween Zeebra line was a nice punch. Thats all I seen that was decent. Closing: Rhymed Wish with bitch. What more do I have to say? I don't understand why this dude be using all these big ass words one minute and then he'll rhyme for example simple with pimple. Stick to one style fam and you'll be aight. My vote goes to Kingz. |
appreciate the vote. dirtboy is they a minimum number of posts that u need to have to vote or summit? i think u shud set one next week. especially for the championship match
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Aiyo...This Is My Last Battle...
Tired Of Hate Votes and Peeps Who Don't Know Shit.. Kid With 8 Votes.....Votes On This Battle Like He Is Hot LMAO.. Maybe Sum Real Votes Would Be Nice...Sum Kids Who Actually Know What A Good Spit Is.. Like CarsonJet Said...These Herbs Here Don't Know Shit Or Understand The Concepts Of The Punches Us Vets Use.. ~R~ |
I'm more of a vet than you will ever be....
I think I understand battles far more than you So dont bitch... You arent that good |
LoL Kid I Alread Beat You..
And You Tried Having You D/R Friends To Vote For You In The First 10 Minutes LMAO... Newayz...This Is Why Rb.com Will Never Progress, Because No One On This Site Has Anything Positive To Say To Anyone Else....Everyone Has Sumthing Negative To Say.. I Never Say Anything Negative To An Emcee...Unless Its A Battle.....I Am Always Positive Towards Them and Giving Them Props....Thats A True Vet.... Fuck You Native..Your Far From A Decent Emcee... Only Reason You A Vet Is Because You Been on RB.com For 4 Years..Because You Can't Get A Fucking Deal Nor A Fucking Life LMAO.. Please Kid..Go Get A Life and Sum Pussy.... ~R~ |
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I've been on RB for 1 year.... And you only win because of D/R You're just leaving now because people are catching onto what real battles are about |
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.::Nah Kid::.
Your Name Is Chrit...and You've Been On For More Than 2 Years.. Nah I Am Not Done Battling, I Just Said That Cause I Was Mad.. But I Will Just Work On The Way I Used To Drop...That's All... I Know Fasho I Beat ThiS Kid Though.. ~R~ |
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