premanition spanked dat ass. yo J what was wit havin to explain words from yo rap dawg? lol.

premanition:
choke ya on ya pride...i'll make ya swallow ya profile....
explaining ya punches?..j must think rb is dosile...

that was a crazy line dawg. good job.

hey yall need some votes in the battle link below.. apriciate it.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123941

1 vote to finish this...we'll both return favours wiv honest votes on ur battles....pz

Yo i gotta say that JSmoove got this...but only just he came real hard in the beginning and maintained a decent structure throughout. Also his punches, personals e.t.c effected u real bad Pre.

Pre, u had a decent verse but i think u were too laid back to do anything about it not all ur effort put into this dissapointing but a decent verse anyways.

V/JSmoove

^^^o.k but feel ya might be hatin cos i voted against you....but pz

JSmoove won this...he did good in the beggining and kept a decent structure throughout. Also his punches, personals e.t.c effected u real bad Pre.

Pre, u had a good verse but i think u were too laid back to do anything about it not all ur effort put into this dissapointing but a decent verse anyways.

V/JSmoove
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uppin some real fuckin votes can't believe this kid got one vote he didnt have one punch in the whole thing....uppin votes from people actually readin the verses!

i think premenition won because his punches hit a lot harder and for jsmoove, u should neva have to explain ur punches and those i already could understand

good battle my vote-preminition