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-   -   eric89 Vs 20 GraND (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=123531)

20 GraND 05-11-04 02:41 PM

UppN, thnx for all the votes so far yo

eric89 05-11-04 05:20 PM

Uppin For Votes

20 GraND 05-11-04 05:46 PM

UppN fo some votes yo

Lyriclesolja 05-11-04 07:31 PM

Yo eric good spit its a solid rhyme but u do need to practice on some vocab. so pick up a dictionary so it can learn ya. Yo 20 you really need to work on flow you go from one subject to another to quick try to make it go to geather better.

I Vote: Eric

shadow 05-11-04 07:57 PM

20 grand
good spit nice flow good punches you kept it flowing real good
it was maybe one of ur best, u did good real good

favorite line:
You cant handle this like a car with out a steering wheel//
Your a fuckin "fruit", only u dont have "appeal"// (<--- get it, a peel)
that was pretty hott
areas u need inprove ment on::::::::::::
multies meta4's and similies
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u had and ok spit eric 89
but it didnt keep me intrested it was kinda wack no offense
u had ok punches they were kinda childish
u had ok structure
and the flow was terribly off
areas u need improvement on:
punches and structure and the structure will really help ur flow
bets line:ut ohh someones chokin under all the heat
ima chew u up and spit u out like a lion does to raw meat
u liked it cuz u used a similie
but my vote swings the way of 20 grand

lil luke 05-11-04 08:43 PM

damn eric nice spit
20 grand you wer pretty good to

eric best line
how u expect to get any votes on this battle
unless u ride someones dick like a horse and a sattle

eric-7.5/10
20 grand 7/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

eric89 05-11-04 08:44 PM

thanks luke uppin still

lil luke 05-11-04 09:56 PM

it was close but eric got my vote in the end

eric6.5/10
20grand6/10

accomplishment 05-11-04 10:09 PM

rvote 20 return da favor

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eric89 05-12-04 07:30 AM

Uppin For Votes

20 GraND 05-12-04 02:42 PM

UppN, Plz explain votes holla..

20 GraND 05-12-04 05:47 PM

UppN yo

20 GraND 05-12-04 08:48 PM

Stillz UppN Yo

20 GraND 05-13-04 02:50 PM

UppN, Stillz Yo

eric89 05-13-04 03:10 PM

Uppin 4 Votes


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