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uppin 4 more votes, man
i only do this every 3 hours, don just vote |
God - iight spit man, you had some good flow.. but your punches wernt all that great.
Best Line - You Be As Rotten As Xpired Milk From Da Grocery Stores That's Why I'ma Knock You Out Back And Forth Like Those Swingin Doors Worst Line - Rest In Peace Cauze My Lyricism Got You Ready To Die Cauze Like French Fries I'ma Get You Fried MC - Good spit man, you had a good flow. and your punches were pretty hot, and you had some good mult's. Best Line - ur rhymes lackin flavor like empty gum packs so now u ejacu|ate backwards just to 'cum back'// this kids a soft ass like bum wax, like athletes in 'special olympics' u runnin 'dumb tracks'// Worst Line - ur ass wouldn't be sharp if u shit spikes...like stuffed animals u kno im gonna rip white!// ooooo this recycler likes to flip bikes so i'll leave j white seein more 'blood' than crypt fights//* OVERALL - Iight battle.. but I gotta give this to... MC. He had a better flow and his punches wee better. God you had some good flow you just gotta work on throwin more punches and use better wordplay. VOTE - MC RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123755 |
Both these rhymes were hot but here is how I break it down:
Punches: Murder (GodFather had more creative punches but Murder had more so I'll give him it) Structure: GodFather (Easier to read) Flow: Murder (GodFather's was easier to read but simple and I just enjoyed Murder's verse more) WordPlay: both were good but I give it to Murder GodFather best line:"You Be As Rotten As Xpired Milk From Da Grocery Stores That's Why I'ma Knock You Out Back And Forth Like Those Swingin Doors" Murder best line "ur rhymes lackin flavor like empty gum packs so now u ejacu|ate backwards just to 'cum back'// " Overall I give it to Murder. Main reason is that he had more punches and some very potent ones at that. Hit up these while ya watchin this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120624 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122330 |
Nice battle
MC murder took this because he came better with punches and his lien swere'nt all bullshit fillers i have to say that was some weak stuff Godfather anyway keep elevating; |
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