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In-Vision 06-10-04 01:40 AM

okay..mc's reaper...that wasn't a good verse...I mean you rhymed..and had structure but thats about it..you had no personals at all..and barely any decent hitting punchlines out of 50 I'd give you a 5...you need to elevate a lot more

Im too nice... I spit my own rhymes.. So y u pasteing and copying for?...
Talk hard when tha only 'JAIL' u seen was on 'MONOPLOY BOARDS!'//

Jae, your verse flowed a lot more smoothly, was a lot shorter, had better structure, and had better personals and punches...not to mention that line was fairly clever...good verse...you got my vote

-NERVEZ- 06-21-04 03:09 AM

i think reaper took dis no question.he had a more ellaborate stucture..better punches n personalls
v/mc reaper

Sik Wit It 06-23-04 03:48 AM

Jae gets my vote becuz i say that his punches was a little bit harder than Mc's..his flow was good..tha wordplay was nice...& tha structure was betta than Mc's..in my opinion i think Jae rip'd this kat folks :)..so Jae gets my vote....peace...................

Sik Wit It 06-23-04 09:20 PM

..........Uppin This Battle People..........

Lethal Kahn 06-25-04 04:09 PM

Jae came more consistent with everything. He had weak shit, but they were enough to beat that other dude. Flow was wack from both sides though. And you 2 need to change the structure. Seriously. Anyhoo...

V/Jae Gutta


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