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Kryogenix's punches hit harder then sac king's and his metaphors were better. i wasn't really feelin sac king's and it has hard reading kyro's verse. but overall kryo had the harder verse

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Sac King cant rap, hes a newb, so he better act it
But he cant even do that right.........
........................Like fat people trying to backflip....

This was the best bar of the battle... I think Sac needed to come with some more complexity and some hard punchlines- The whole verse you wrote lacked in any good wordplay or punchlines... Your structure got all screwy at the end, I just think it was a weak verse in general and your gonna need to come harder next time. Kryogenix.. I dont really like the way you structured your verse to make every bar the same length like that- but your punches were much harder, you had a much better grasp of how you wanted to go about writing this verse and you had a few good punches which ultimately made this battle one sided.... My vote goes to Kryogenix. Good luck people please return the favor.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125808