Yo Good battle on both parts.....

Disasters Best Line: "You Can't Deliver Shit, Your Hits Never Hurt Me,
Ill Cut Your Ass Up, Leave You Raw Like Eddie Murphy"

Worst Line: Your Lyrics Are Shit, Deep Inside You Aint Real,
Fuck These People And Their Votes, I Dont Give A Fuck How they Feel

and as for optimals........

Best Line: The only time niggaz like ya "spit" is after u "suck'em"
And the only way u get there votes is if u fuck'em

Worst Line: Ya punches hit like slaps so i wasnt affected by ya windmills
I leave ur ass knocked "out of the game" tryna come back like "grant hill"

Nice structure Diasaster and optimal nice punches..............Oh and by the way Diasaster never dis a voter!

I Vote: Optimal


^^^jus wot i think on this,,...pz

can y'all hit up this wiv an honest vote, thanx!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123463

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damn imma have to give this to optimal..optimal ya shit was sick i was feelin that thong line..shit was ill...i was like..DAYUM nigga dun did it like dat lmfao..but that was str8 sick good flow n good metas

disaster...ur shit was sick..buit plz pm me tellin me wat u meant with that eddie murphy line i didnt get it...but ur ish wasc nice but u can do better..n nce flow

vote:op

optimal that was HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!

Flow - i was feeling Disaster's flow more, it was smoother

Punches - disaster, optimals punches were kind of weak, quote..
"The only time niggaz like ya "spit" is after u "suck'em"
And the only way u get there votes is if u fuck'em"

Personals - neither had many personals, so Tie

Multies - there was like 1 line of multis, and disaster had it, i'm a fan of multis and use them alot, and thats what i look for, i was disapointed

Vocab - neither had much complex vocab, it was lame, but Optimal got it

Originality - Disaster had more originality, i liked the pam anderson line



vote disaster


p.s. will ya girl suck ma cock??


hahahahha

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Metahs- tie
multis- opt
punchlines- opt
Creativity- opt
FLow- tie

My vote goes to opt becuz Disaster didn't come strong at all and i wasn't feeling the structure compared to opt's..overall it was an ok battle but OPTIMAL gets my vote


SB

(p.s. disater u need to check the bitch slapped section...)

SPOKENBLUNTLY

Yeah this was a pretty decent battle through and through... I think the only problem either of you have is the punchlines are still short of being bulletproof... I think Optimals punches had more consistency in landing and making enough obvious sense to get a little chuckle so Ima vote for Optimal.