RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=63)
-   -   Terror vs Lyrical KILLAH (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=124126)

Valor 05-14-04 12:32 AM

ok honest vote here.......
terror- ur verse was ight......ur flow was good,your structure was ok,nice punches......but next time try and be a little more creative with ur verse...a lil more wittieness

LK-ur verse was nice.....u had nice flow,punches,your structure sucked tho....
but ur verse u were more creative with ur verse tho...so i like that shit...

punches:LK
flow:LK
structure:terror
creativity: LK

v/LK

lyrical KILLAH 05-14-04 07:46 AM

Ok Uppin This Cuz We Had Mad D/q Votes Plz Explain Votes Well

S.Carter 05-14-04 08:27 AM

Terror verse to me was just plain need to work on your flow structure and get better punchlines to grab someones attention

Lyrical his verse was good not great but between the both he had better flow and structure and much better punchlines

Vote LK

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Red Dogg420 05-14-04 08:38 AM

this goes to lyrical killa, had better punchlines and he flowed better. he also had sum nice multis, over all 6/10

for tha other guy wich ill save tha imbaressment and not typer ur name, u need to work on punchlines and multis, overall 3/10

sHiFtY fInGeRs 05-14-04 09:19 AM

ok here we go
flow-it was their for both of you two the flow was good
structure- but killah's structure was a bit better which made his flow a bit better
multi's- important part of a battle to me, a good use of multis can really make the difference and i thought killah took that aspect of the battle also
punches and personals-both came hard with the hits but in the end lyrical killah took those too, but in each of the categories it was close either way just killah took it a bit further
so my vote is gonna go to lk
return the fav and vote the shifty-vs-pimp rawb on the front lines peace

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-14-04 09:54 AM

Lyrical Killa got this fa sho. His punches were a lot more witty. Punches win battles, so I'm givin it to him. Good job to both MCz doe... Plz return da favor wid an honest vote on my battle... Thanx...
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...692#post1286692

VOTE=LYRICAL

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

lyrical KILLAH 05-14-04 05:49 PM

wut the fuck this is bullshit i won this battle 8-0 but know they going to d/q 5 of my votes iight ppl if ur going to vote explain that shit well

Triple_N 05-14-04 06:01 PM

Flow....Killa took this he flowed better cuz he didn't strectch his lines an his syllabales were pretty much even throughout
Multies...Killa took this hands way more multies terror had none in his verse at all
Punches....Killa came way harder wit the punches his opener shut down terror's whole verse
Personals....Killa actually had some only a few but terror had none so kill takes it
Vocab.....Killa had much stronger vocab in this one, terror's whole verse was basic throughout need to evelate there seriously man
Wordplay....Killa took this too damn this is getting old but another cateogory to killa, terror was completely out classed him here
Overall...killa had a way more polished an experienced verse than terror, obvious ly terror was not ready for this type of battle
Vote: Killa

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-14-04 06:24 PM

There’s no flame in your name... my spits already turn your punches to mist.../
I take no offense to your diss, like a venom less snake all you do is hiss.../
^Nice Use Of Multies' ..!! & Creative Opener...

Do the fucking math, Terror ain't ill...he's just a fuckin' liar.../
He the type to have hot sex with himself daily by lighting his cum on fire../

^Weak Punch.. Not Feeling It'.....

Ya Might As Well Vanish Like Clouds Do When Everybody On This Board Doubts You.../
Terror i'd Hit You With A Ton Of Personals...But Nobody On This Site Gives A Fuck About You.../
^Nice Creative Closer Aswell...!!


Checckit Checck Checck

Poeple votin you Rookie when im really The Rookie-Above-You//
If poeple payed attention they would know i can Rip-Right-Through-You//
^Weak Opener' .. Playa...!! Shame Shame Shame..

Ur Flow is Still in Grade School and mine got Lyrically Excelled//
So many ways to Murder u on The Mic can i be more Detailed//
^Nice Punch' .... Its Heated' ..!! :)

I Just Left your Ass Danglin "Right Thur" like you was a Played-Out Chingy//
Tryin to keep ur head above Saliva,When u cant evan Flow with a Dingy//
(Float)
^ Creative Closer!!!

Vote: LK


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:14 AM.