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This Battle Is Still Uppin WILL RETURN FAVOR......
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b20
Thiz guyz scriptz show hez a minister ov the weak If ya listen hiz lyricz even practice what he preach.. Nice wordplay- this punchline was a good opener. Ya namez not unique nor does it fit ya quit right.. Cuz Myers is the only known 'Murderous Mic'.. Decent Tryna make money from rap but ya get humiliated.. So to support ya family ya cuz got smart n graduated..!! Decent I'ma stated role model...I see ya really look up to B.. I mean ya accepted my challenge to get close to me..!! I liked this line a little more than the previous two, the whole bar snapped. Fukk M-I-C ya simply Missin Ill Context.. Writin can't profit you like fillin out hot checkz..!! Good closer, again good wordplay into the punch. Murderous Mic Its b2o's First Battle I Guess I Should Be Ready To Merk.... This b2o's Lines Wouldnt Be Any Shorter If His Rhymes Were A Damn Mini-Skirt......* Decent, not great for an opener though. I'll Be The First To Tell Yall.....This Kid Has No Game..... He Has A Whack Verse....And Noone Knows The Meaning To His Name..... This was good, better than the first bar- a little personal insult. This Kid Gets Hanged....Even More Times Than I Hang "Hangers" This Kid "Taps" More Senior Citizens......Then Damn GanG "BANGERS"....** Egh, you coulda used more vocab - in the first line you said Hang 3 times, and Gang Bangers and Senior Citizens dont reference well in the punch which woulda been necessary to give the taps a solid foundation, otherwise its missed. Im Gonna Slice His Body Lyrically.......More Times Than Butchers Slashin Meat.... B2o's Rhymes Is incomplete I Told Him To Talk To The Hand....And The Bitch Tried To Rape My FEET......*** I don't really feel this, your structure got a little off, and it just wasn't as good as I've seen you come before... This Is My Closing....I End It With A Good-Bye But You Got Merked...... I Told Him My Rhymes Were "INSANE" He Tried To Copy Me And He Went Beserk..... This was better, not a new concept or anything but its wordplay... All in all I think b20's lines had alot higher tendency to land and I think you just must've had an off day cuz Ive seen you come nicer than this before. Im not sure if Ive ever even voted against you before but I think this time B20 earned the V, so theres my vote... please return the fav with an honest one... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125808 |
uppz.....
btw...Murderous Mic (Mike)..Michael Myers :thefinger |
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flow-B metas-tie punches-B personals-tie closer-Mic opener-tie both weak creativity-B enjoyment-B v/B20 B20's best lines Tryna make money from rap but ya get humiliated.. So to support ya family ya cuz got smart n graduated..!! I'ma stated role model...I see ya really look up to B.. I mean ya accepted my challenge to get close to me..!! ^^that shit was ill.....humoris and hard hittin....... your structure was good and your flow was onpoint.......your punches was good and they hit hard.........not bad personals but you need to work on them so they hit harder........good verse.......pc SwizZ's best lines I'll Be The First To Tell Yall.....This Kid Has No Game..... He Has A Whack Verse....And Noone Knows The Meaning To His Name..... This Kid Gets Hanged....Even More Times Than I Hang "Hangers" This Kid "Taps" More Senior Citizens......Then Damn GanG "BANGERS"....** ^^the first line was good and humoris.......but the second kind was kinda played in concept...... your structure was bad.......some places was good but other was stretched and you shouldnt space out your bars like that becuase it takes away from your flow and makes it hard to read.......your punches was okay but you need to reword them so that they hit harder.......keep elevating.......pc v/B20 hit this up with an honest vote JOKE BATTLE |
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murder you went a lil 2 easy.....if u could have fuked him up u should of.
b20 had aight punches and he was tryin 2 battle. but i wasnt feelin sum of those inez it seemd like b20 was jockin murderous.............weak battle hard choice......vote goes 2 murderous mic...................im uppin 4 votes on my battles need positive feedbak n honest opinions...... |
punchlines: B2o
metaphores: B2o flow: B2o who do i vote for: B2o he was just a little better, i liked reading his more. |
B20: u had good flow, ur structure was put together well, u had good personals(graduation bit)and off his name, it was decent.But u took it with ur wordplay and ur punches off his name...
murderous:ur structure was off a bit, u didnt need the spacing and u could have come harder..it sounded like u was just rhymin to rhyme and not compete...but i got all love seriously......VOTE:B20 |
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