Deleon: nice flow and rhymes that was pretty good but no punches dog and macka got some good punches nice flow and nailing it -Vote Macka
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damn, ok, some votes have been disqualified, so uppin for more i gess.
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its these fuckin newbs explained your votes so we dont got to wave um off
i'd rather have vets vote on this.....like choppa city did |
Deleon
Best Line... My Razor-is-Pressed, I made it Graze-through-your-Neck I'll Drown you Greater-in-Depths of a Lake-when-it's-Drenched Worst Line... My Range-and-my-Lex are full of Paste-to-Inject Tripping till you're thinking you're in Space-like-a-Trek MACKA Best Line.... You got no punches like a right-handed Jim Abbott while I smash-your-chest// You’ll regret trying to spit against me so you try and “catch-your-breath”// Worst Line..... Make-you-feel-pain, shakin-your-“frame” like earthquakes-to-a-window// Lyrically rape your wife while my verse-makes-her-a-widow// Macka-I Liked You Punches Personal And Structure But The Struucture Was Pretty Off Deleon..Loved YouR Verse But Didnt Have Any Personal's Your Structure Was NEat But I Guess Macka W0N ThIs...... |
Damn!guess going easy on a newb has come to bite me back in the ass twice
no more of that shit :nono: ...but on the real nice drop macka |
macka you didnt drop the vote i my battle so when you vote in it I will vote in this so till then........ya better poll
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Macka-alright stuff but came weak and hard
structure was ok but deleon's was better.......SImilies was ok so was the metas.....SImply work on the balance also the complexity..... Deleon-Came ok....but not that alright.....some was ok some was simply weak....structure was good similies need work metas was ok......Personals dont really know Complexity ok......Keep elevatin aight v.Macka |
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