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aight heres how i saw it

gaven u had good punches but the problem was they werent organized i think u should try a better rhyme scheme cause it doesnt flow too well. i liked the line bout stabbin in tha face that was good.

muderous mic ur flow is great the only lije i think didnt make sense was bout the lesbians but it still fit. the way u splled out that message wit ur lines was crazy i liked that. u have good hits i liked it a lot

my vote-murderous mic
but u both did good

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murderous won this because he had better structure, punches and just better verse overall. I thought the other verse didn't flow very well nad have nasy punchlines for murd to be offended or evem take you serious. Murd oe dis quite easerly with his rymes n punches. No hard feelings

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yo gavin man, u need to go back to feedin your rabbits and carryin cow dung cause that shit was bad, u forced ur multis to a new extreme not yet seen on this website

other guy- ur shit wasn't great but it killed gavins and the letter scheme thing was a nice touch

absolutely a one sided battle....gavin u had nothing that really interested me...played punches or no punches at all no rhyme schme no structure no flow no multies no wordplay no good vocab your verse was ass...murderous ya verse was nice tho i liked it alot of originality and hott punches good wordplay a couple multies....overall u murked him

vote: murderous

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gavins verse was suppppppppppppppppppppa wack.... sorry i forgot a P in dat supa...Vote goes 2 _murderous_mic

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Alright now that my vote here counts, Ill offer an explained vote...

Gavin your punchlines were weak... Perfect example wtf does feeding a rabbit have to do with being able to write a good rhyme... or the Fizz-E line...Wtf was the punchline? Fizzy? it doesn't pop-- its not a line thats going to make the reader go..Holy Shit that was some cruel shit...Try to work on that and you will improve greatly.

Murderous... I think its really creative the way you did that isht down the left side of your verse... It think you had a couple punchlines here that were pretty nice and you had a more than decent flow so I definately give you the win just cuz I think you have a deeper grasp of this than your opponent does... Good luck to both of you in the future and please vote on this battle if you haven't already and I will return the favor in another of your battles.... Vote: Goes to Murderous http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124935