Multis:mike
Punches:tie
Wordplay:mike
Wordage:duece
Entertaining:lmao MIKE

my vote goes to mike cuz his punches were funny i was laughing reading it that shit...his lines were mostly punches and his vocab was good..Mike i liked ur shit to..u came hard but mikes punches were more entertainined..so Mike gets da vote..alright battle

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break down

Mike12IKEDA:good verse,solid structure,um good flow,tight
best line:You ain’t the king, you the “queen” of this ring, have you heard-of-Sable?//
G: Duece is one emcee that I’ll hurt-n-disable
If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label
You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables”….
pretty good,good wordplay.structure,good solid flow
worst line:You will never take home a W even though you rap all serious
Get this emcee a tampon cause I made this pussy bleed like he was having-his-period….
loose rhyming,but good
work on: add some punches in your verse and youll be sicker
overall: 7/10

GDEUCE:good verse,but some lines made me shake my head,but pretty average flow,your structure wasnt the very best either.
best line:I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind
Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find
not very good,but the best in there
worst line:teach you how to use it
Move down your spind, quick stopping your heart, now that’s acoustic
rough flow,not very good structure
work on:your structure,add some punches,but apart from that fine.
overall:6/10

FINAL VOTE: MIKE12IKEDA

flow-mike
punches-mike
personals-none
structure-mike
creativity-tie
enjoyment-mike

vote/mike

you had a better overall verse.....your flow was going good and your structure was bettr then his......work on your punches and deffinly put personals in your verse even if they are weak it is better then nun

g-you need to elevate......i would expect sumwun with your status to come alot harder and better.......but i guess that i over estamated you....

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aight listen...

mike good structure but kinda work on punches i didnt really see any there like and half of the punches are played and arnt really punches at all your flow is mediocare your prolly best thing of this battle was ur structure.... work on everything

deuce not to shabby your flow was hard to follow cuz of structure but once i figured it out you killed it with multies and wordplay, and you came with punches unlike mike thats why

DEUCE GETS MY VOTE

ok i likeed both verses but G really had da punches dat made we wanna stop and say god damn mike u had punches dat connected and it was a pretty nice flow 2 go along both verses stayed consitant threw yo whole drop and both laid down a nice battle

mike-

You ain’t the king, you the “queen” of this ring, have you heard-of-Sable?//
G: Duece is one emcee that I’ll hurt-n-disable
If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label
You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables”….

^^ nice piece of work all was consitant nice drop

worsteline-none nice way 2 go wit the flow

overall verse gets a 8.7/10

G-duece

bestline-Words relaxin, I lay back, my lines divide and rip rhymes to fractions
I’ll "roll the credits", cause Mike’s lines are "missing all the action".

nice drop descenty throught out the verse

worsteline-none

overall verse gets a 9/10

winner-g-duece

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Aight i think mike came harder with punches and flowed better.... is shit reads like he just rapped of tha dome
i think G u thought too much u should jus kick back and flow , i have the same problem some times and peeps hit me up bout it so just work on that other than that u aight

KEEP Elevatin!

V= Mike

duece i like you rhyme slot. this si a close battle. nice wordplay in the begining. i thought you could have won if you didn't write so much. you did good with the multiples. you lacked hard hittin punches towards the end of your verse. mike you came hard though. you were consistent throughout your verse,nice punches and multiples. i really like your punches, keep it going. sorry duece nice battle dogg.return the fava

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uppin for real educated votes.....................

ok both work on vocab and personals and multis
im gonna give this 2 g duece his punches hit harder his structure was better
good verse from both both could use elevation though