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YoungKD33 05-16-04 11:04 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by vinman


i hate to say this but i really had 9 lines i jus spaced it out if u put it together and not spaced out i only have 9 lines well sorry if u think i had 20

check it yo rhmyes was boring and made the crowd go BOO(1)
MY FLOW IS SO FAST AnD MADE YO BODy SPIN TOO(2)

im comin at this nigga and im spittin this shit fast(3)
we only in the first round and i dont think he will last(4)

he say that i dream of victory and that i rap on the street(5)
but im pucnhing this nigga from his head to feet(6)

my flow is like a chemical its deadly and its sting(7)
before even stared he was scared to get in the ring(mat)(8)

im spittin and he shaking making his whole body turn(9)
<<<<This is 9 lines dawg...you spit 10 bars which = 20 lines>>>>

but as sooin as my flow touches its gona both sting and burn

im tired of weak ass niggas that think they can win
before we even start im have this nigga pinned

got this bitch breathless he cant even use his tounge
because my flow was so daedly it blew out his damn lungs

its only the seventh bar and this bitch is already dead
hes at the end of his mark like a broken pencil lead

this nigga say that his flow is the deadliest ever seen
yea the FUCK RIGHT ONLY TO THE PREMATURE RETARDED TEENS

i shoot yo ass up all they could find were the bits
you was crumbled in the corner like the golden cracker RITS




dawg can you count you spit 20 lines...each line had on rhyme to match it...you dropped 20 lines to my 10 lines...but whatever you just don't know what your talkin about...no matter i didn't even drop my best....uppin on this bullshyt battle...

vinman 05-16-04 12:04 PM

uppin for some damn votes come on nigga wake up

Metaskriptz 05-16-04 02:06 PM

ok.......young-Nice spit
aight.....strcture needs more work though
similies was ok so was mets.....Work on a few more
things

vinman......I think ya took this by a tinty becuz
he was close up on ya.....Structure was better
then your....But the similies and metas are alright
Work on balance though and complexity

v/vinman

Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400

vinman 05-16-04 03:30 PM

uppin for votes

Lil Nae2 05-16-04 03:40 PM

Vinman his cam so hard in dis i was hott good glow young elevate dats all i gotta say
but vinman yo rhymes was simple elevate on yo vocab man but otha wise dis was an ok battle

v/vinman

Unknown Assassin 05-16-04 04:44 PM

vinman beat this nigga wit his good punches and word play you both need to elevate though but this is a very good battle and i enjoyed it but the punches were weak in both battles but vinmans were better so i vote for him


ma vote goes to vinman


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