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yo......seventhird this ones yours. yo lines aws happening from the begginig to end
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IceBerg-Nice spit........You came hard with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and metaphores......just work on a few things and ya will be there...... Seven-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok but work on some thing.....balace was good but some was weak and some was hard.....But keep elevatin and work on alot of things v/Iceberg |
Still uppin for votes..............................
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Damn this was a tight battle very close battle. both of yall came correct hard hitting punches smooth flow, very creative. However, Sevens opener with the iceburg was killer that was pretty tight. Burgs' sex in circles was nice as well but didn't have teh creativity. The Dissmiss line was nice very creatie, overall that why I'm give'n this one to Seven cause his punches were a bit more creaitve thats why his punches hit harder. All in all this was a close battle I'd think that it was going to go down to the wire.
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Iceberg your word play was nice you punches were better sometimes than others. the line "I'll scissor this bitch into a chop shop remove hands n seconds as if I took apart clocks" was a bit too long.
Seven - Good shit man. you did a nice <A TITLE="Click for more information about job" STYLE="text-decoration: none; border-bottom: medium solid green;" HREF="http://search.targetwords.com/u.search?x=5977|1||||job|AA1VDw">job</A> on your punches your opener and closer was a little better than Ice's. Good use of word play Vote : seven $MOKESKREEN vs GENERAL HOOD |
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