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first let me say i was feelin both participants in this battle
Black: Your flow was a little hard to follow wit tha way you wrote it and all and some of the words you used but your punches were raw and uncut like pure cocaine. Hot 2 death my nigga. Hottest line: "Shove jackets down your throat makin you throw up your hood" Worst line: "This boys worthless and your previous battles aren't helping you get sick like toy nurses" I wasn't really feelin dat but it's cool. Gkillaz: I done seen you spit some real sick shit this battle wasn't up there wit those but it was good. Your verse was the exact opposite of your opponents. Flow was tight but you lacked in da punchline field homie. Hottest line: "I'm smokin a guy from youngs town he's turnin my lungs brown" Worst line: "I'm droppin my shit on you like you was the crapper that can seat to" I ain't understand dat line doggy. But like I said it was a good battle. vote=black magick swing thru here and peep this http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...78&page=2&pp=15 |
thx for the honest vote.. keep em comin peeps..
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I KNOW YOU AINT GOOD, plus you''l never wioll be able to get yours FLOWS UNDERSTOOD,
Cause Blacks the tpyes you ((SHOVE JACKETS DOWN YA THROAT)) makin your THROW UP YA HOOD)), nice This BOYS WORTHLESS and you prevoius battle arent helpig you get sick like TOY NURSES, And you couldnt be (( LYRICAL DESTRUCTION)) if you deSTROY VERSES, ok.... What I've WROTE IT HECKTIK, you'd denied my talent after I already have TOLD I"M VET BITCh, meh.... And the type to ((CONNECT YA FEET TO YA HEADS)) like YOGA STRETCHES, ok.... I've already had warned you that I'm oblious not the correct ONE TO TEST KID, Cause like POWERFUL TOILETS, I'll easily CRUSH YOUR BEST SHIT, nice.......... I'll DISPOSE THIS VET, and pentrate knives iinto his spleen and INCLOSE HIS CHEST, Cause I'm like (( GETTING FLAHSED BY REAPERS)) I'll leave him EXPOSED TO DEATH, nice ending nice verse some lines were a little questionable, but nice wordplay, you need more multies...and make sure your verse isnt played out.....its good punches...but you gotta make sure... Black Magik Take Back Your Whack Newb Jacket You Cant Hack It... That Verse Was Just Horible And Only Shitty Newbs Use Brackets...damn!!!!!!!! Im Dropin My Shit On You Like You Was The Crapper That Can Seat To... I Dont Even Need To Try Because Even My Rapper Can Beat You...hahahaha Sayin Your The Greatest Wit Your Whack Flow Thats Unbelievable... Beatin Me Aint As Easy And Wit Your Whack Flow It Aint Achievable...meh....... Im Smokin A Guy From Youngs-Town He's Turnin My Lungs-Brown... Got Brackets Around His Verse And Name Soundin Like A Clown...noooo Goin To Drown You In The Ocean, GKillaz Dont Show Any Emotion... Once My Crew See's How Badly I Merked You I Gun Get A Promotion...ok.............. gkillaz, your openers were hot as hell but then you fell off like a newb.....damn man...if u spit like that the whole time, you woulda won for sure.....but good battle, nice personals, sry man... i give it to the other guy for consistency....peace...no hate |
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We could go 2-2 tied or 4-2 me your choice
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yo black magik took this with his creativity and hard punchlines. this was a good battle though.
yo please vote on my battle and help me finish this bitch off http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125321 |
structure : GKilla
flow:GKilla punches:Black Magik V/ Gkilla05 and why the final...well GKilla05's verse was just more to the point i think, the flow was good |
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Black Magik
yo man ure flow was off man, u had sum fucked up structure cuz u had ure lines stretched like madd which is never gud. u had sum aight punches but sum of ure stuff was played and their wasn't really anything that original that stood out to me. u had a couple of personals but that was it and they didnt even hit that hard. u need to beef up ure punches and work on personals, also fix up ure structure. OVERALL 6/10 GKillaz05 u had a tight flow goin on in ure drop. u had a nice structure kept shit together nuthin stretched like fuck. ure shit flowed hott from beginning to end and i was feelin it a lot more. u had punches in there but you two lacked for creativity and ure lines were pretty basic in places. some were hard hitting, couple of nice personals and u had a few multis in ure drop. just really work on ure wordplay, make it more complex and try and strengthen ure punches. OVERALL 7.5/10 V/ - GKillaz05 |
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